I’ve been sobbing for hours. Thank you for this masterpiece that is everything I have been wanting to read for 15 years after the premiere of the Legend of Korra and seeing Aang’s statue in the Republic City Bay all those years ago. My heart is still shattered for these fictional characters that still hold a place in my heart. I started reading fanfics again this week after the announcement of the new Seven Havens series and movie. I can only hope the movie will be a fraction of the depth of humanity you have portrayed here in these beloved characters. Thank you again, Calenture.

It's been years since this story has been published, but I couldn't help myself and comment. This story made me laugh out loud, and then eventually weep uncontrollably. The writing is extremely descriptive, with the banter melting my heart. The relationship spun for Aang and Katara was exactly how I would imagine their happy ending would happen. Author, I wish you the best with your talents, because I definitely feel it's at the level where you can make a career out of it. Thanks.

What? Was Katara going to threaten to hit Aang with a spoon or something like that? I’m asking
because I am curious and was just wondering.

Excellent job on making Katara and Aang seeing eye to eye with one another and great job on the apology from Katara! She acknowledged what she did wrong and apologized for it on top of reassuring Aang that he is not a bad father nor is lacking as a parent. I’m also surprised that despite being hurt, Aang tried to step up and do what Katara asked him to do, become the disciplinarian. Anyway, great job executing the apology and this is a much better make-up scene than the one in chapter 4!

I’m so glad for the next chapter that Katara apologized to Aang for getting pissed off at him. Otherwise, this review would be way more negative. Katara NEEDS to get her temper under control. It’s making her act like a bitch towards the ones that she loves. It’s pretty hurtful that she would state that Aang was a bad father in this chapter and how she doubted his abilities of being one. While she may be right that Aang may be too laid back as a parent, her delivery of telling him to toughen up was very rude and hurtful; and she only said those things all because of her damn temper. It’s a real problem and it’s making her hurt the ones that she loves very badly. Thank god she realizes this next chapter and apologizes for it as well as stating that she has never found him lacking as a parent and that he is a good father.

Chapter 11: Why would Aang be constantly getting lectures by Katara?

Why would Katara give Aang a menacing growl?

Not gonna lie, I’m not the biggest fan of Katara’s character. Her being violent and mean towards her brother or Aang, threatening Aang with violence, blaming him whenever her kids annoy her or when they don’t do what she wants her to do, always being annoyed, and to top it all off: water whipping Sokka for teasing Kya. Seriously, why is she such a bitch? Please tell me why I’m wrong. I don’t want to be critical of her or hate her character, but the way you write Katara makes me hate her.

Why was Katara giving Aang a mock applause?

Why was Katara giving a warning growl at Aang?

Katara is not a better person than Aang. Why? Because she treated him like shit! So she’s a “better person” because if roles were swapped she wouldn’t run away if Aang was being cold and resentful to her? No. That’s 100% bullshit. He’s selfish? Oh come on! She was the one who was resenting him and being cold for no fucking reason! She’s the one who is selfish! I’m sorry for sounding pissy but I really hate how you made them made up. Especially since Katara never openly said that she was sorry for what she did. Yeah, kissing him and acknowledging that she was being a piece of shit totally makes up for it! 100%!
P.S. I’m sorry for sounding so negative, it’s just that reading that part in the chapter makes me really angry. I still love your story regardless of this negative review!

Sorry for my negative reviews, I love your story! It’s great!

Why did Katara get mad at Aang in the beginning?

This is a question for the previous chapter: why would Katara say that Aang wasn’t around enough, thus ultimately hurting him nor refusing to apologize for it?

Yeah go tell him to fuck himself as well as throwing a shirt at him just for saying stuff like, “I want to help you or I take it as you don’t want my help?” That’s fair! Seriously, why would she do that? Btw, I love your story, don’t get me wrong. It’s a great story. It’s just that I don’t understand why Katara does the stuff that she does sometimes.