|Reviews for If I Had a Heart|
| RavenGaleSpencer chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Andrea always seemed like a rebound girl to me. Jesse is never really shown connecting with her emotionally, like he was with Jane, and in fact he actually seems to care more about Brock than he does about Andrea. I really like how you've explored Andrea's feelings about that here. She must feel insecure that she's constantly being compared to Jane (even if she really isn't).
The ending felt kind of like a cliffhanger. I would really like to have seen Andrea speak up and ask Jesse point-blank, "Do you wish I was her?" It'd be neat to see how that's resolved.
| blanka chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Why you keep putting the same words?
| NikTaylor42 chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Ah, okay. Makes more sense now!
It's really cool how you used the anesthesia to have this scene...although I could totally see Jane's ghost coming back and being all, "Bitch please, can't beat the original"
Great job :P