|Reviews for It Will Keep|
| PlainJane101 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Beautiful writing! You captured the characters perfectly! I love how you portray Snow's thoughts as she observes Eric's posture and behavior. Very good! I can just imagine it.
Please, write more! I want to read more. Your writing is so enjoyable too...that is the way you write! Very good! Even if this is your first fanfiction!
Have you wrote before posting your stuff on fanfiction, multichaptered stories that is?
Well, I can't wait for the next update! :D
| EugeniaVictoria chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
this is a very promising beginning! I like your writing style and I think both Eric and Snow White are very much themselves - I loved the way they teased each other, that deep feeling of trust so obvious between them. Snow White's musings about William and what he is to her were great too, and her realization that she feels safe and alive around the Huntsman.
but, honestly, in my opinion, Eric feels a deep love for her. that's what I thought when I saw the kissing scene in the movie anyway. Don't you agree? because here you sort of had him backing away from her - he did not agree that it was his kiss that awakened her and he was kind of hesitant throughout the entire chapter. but maybe he's just confused? I loved your apt observations, e.g. that he doesn't think he's worthy of her. but all in all I'm not sure what's going on in your huntsman's elusive mind ;-) to wrap this up, I can't wait for the next installment!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Loved it. Well written.
| ChestnutBrumby chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
It really amazes me that you've never written any fanfiction before now - you're -clearly- born to write, that's evident to me only a few lines into this story :) I think I've become an addict to your writing already - I was torn between wanting to take my time reading this, so it would last, and wanting to devour it so I knew the ending!
You've got Snow and Eric down PERFECTLY, the personalities, the tension, the relationship between these two. I loved the whirlwind turnaround from tenderness to indignant anger, just like the Huntsman - flaring up in an instant. Loved the way Snow remembered, hint by hint, who is was that woke her, so that she had to kiss him to be sure.
"You are MY Huntsman." - way to go Snow :D
"The deal was for me to get you to Duke Hammond's, and I just assume that you meant alive" - THIS has to be my allaround favroutie, because I can HEAR the anger in his voice. (Exactly the sort of tone Chris has in Thor, when he's yelling at his father "He just broke your truce!")
You would slay Avengers and Iron Man fics, once you're done with this one, you ought to move on to them :D (I am a complete Marvel nut!)
And one last request... please, don't leave us there, for all the Huntsman would assure us that it will keep, you can't leave this wonderful story hanging! More of this magic, please :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
I really enjoyed this! The unanswered questions, the characterisation and the angst!
| MetalChickCrisis2040 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
I do hope you continue this. It's quite good! :D I love, LOVE that she kissed him. Perhaps he should kiss her next time, eh? Sort of answering her question here and all those unspoken ones? Don't mind me, I'm just being a hopeful romantic!
| LenaLove chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
That was really good! Awesome writing technique and style. I loved it. The emotions were great and the characterization was fantastic too. I hope you continue writing fanfiction.:)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Hope more comes soon! I can't wait!
| Santicela chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
I loved your story, I hope to read another chater.