Reviews for Coming Attractions
sassygirl156 chapter 13 . 9/9/2012
Wow! All kinds of things happening here-as if the revelation that Jacob and Angela are an item isn't enough, they meet "Emmett" (really, what was she thinking using that name?) and Jacob blasts him, then Jacob feels he must share exactly what he thinks about the d/s lifestyle, in public, no less. He really has grabbed on to the negative things he's heard and believes them to be true. While I loved that Bella called Edward, I can't see how meeting Edward is going to change Jacob's perception and make it positive. If anything, I don't think Jacob can be trusted to keep his mouth shut when he realizes who Edward is. He's just too much of a loose cannon. I don't quite understand why it's so important to Bella that Jacob be accepting of her lifestyle.

That Edward was willing to come to Bella when she needed him was touching. She's figured him out, now can she show him how he can be both the boyfriend and the Dom? Great update!
Guest chapter 13 . 9/9/2012
Just found this story, and I'm really enjoying it. I do see a conflict coming though, please correct me if I'm wrong, but it seems they have conflicting needs. Edward seems to want to have a girlfriend, and have a sub/dom relationship on the side, maybe a few hours a week, maybe a day or two. And Bella wants a time consuming sub/dom relationship, sounds like possiably even 24-7. Hoping they talk soon and get all that settled. I read a lot of these stories, I'm really hoping it's actually fair for Edward. I see a lot of authors make Edward give up what he wants just to give Bella what he needs. But the doms needs and wants are just as important, if not slightly more, as the subs. Looking forward to your next chapter. Good luck with your pregnancy.
jansails chapter 13 . 9/9/2012
Jacob may never come around in terms of accepting Bella's preferred lifestyle unless she ends up in a committed relationship, a marriage.
Maybe Bella's got the right idea with Edward, tease him with possibilities?
jansails/jan2
felc13 chapter 13 . 9/9/2012
I love this chapter, Edward coming over and just the ice cream alone proves he really cares. It's great that he can't explain what Bella is doing to him because he has never wanted a serious relationship so he isn't noticing how serious it's getting! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Theoneandonly Mrs EdwardCullen chapter 13 . 9/9/2012
I like Bella's plan. Edward is too much a coward to risk something for his happiness.

Nice chapter ;)
acw1 chapter 13 . 9/9/2012
:)

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Guest chapter 13 . 9/9/2012
Really dont see them working at this point. She said she wants to sub everyday. He seems to like a small dose, maybe once or twice, not all day/week. It seems he really feels the pull for a girlfriend, and she wants a dom more than anything. Really hope you dont change Edward to fit her needs. Hes not looking for 24/7 or more than what he wants. Hoping she either takes what he offers or finds someone else. Please dont make them just about Bellas needs.
kellykaos chapter 13 . 9/9/2012
I'm not usually a big Jacob fan, but I kinda loved the way he reacted when he was introduced to Emmett. It clearly defined him as strictly her friend and brother and protector. Not a lot of people can write a scene like that and not make it look like a jealous ex. Big claps to you xo
mattlukejess chapter 12 . 9/7/2012
Brilliant story I have really enjoyed it :)
cullengirl08 chapter 12 . 9/6/2012
Edward needs to recognize that he likes Bella and she likes him back just as much. I think if he figured that part out, he'd loosen up some and put himself out there.
Luvtwismut chapter 12 . 9/5/2012
That was one steamy update, B! Loved it! And I love how hooked Edward is on Bella. She really has all the control here!
Thanks for the update!
Xoxo,
Jen
twilightobession chapter 12 . 9/5/2012
LOVE THIS! Great job with their first time in Edward's playroom. LOVE LOVE IT! Can't wait for your next update.
SamJayandHolyMae chapter 12 . 9/5/2012
I enjoyed the chapter much except I wondered how Bella felt when Edward handed her the cab money, especially with the explanation he gave her: "You've given me such a wonderful gift tonight it is the least I can do."

Almost seems like the thing a guy says to a prostitute after fucking her...wonder if Bella felt used after having given of herself so freely to him?

Ah, money...it can always ruin the best of intentions.
MrsAuburnCullen chapter 12 . 9/5/2012
I loved it! This Fic is great!
acw1 chapter 12 . 9/5/2012
:)
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