Reviews for Team outing
Justkindaannoyed chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
Im sorry. I like where this is going, but I noticed about 4 different spelling errors in the first 2 paragraphs. It really messes with the flow of the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
I love the innocence and purity of this story. There were no violence and it was so fluffy!
Fanfictiongirl1357 chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
This was a good story i liked it!
windy day1117 chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
This story is so sweet! I was wondering if you can write a story about Ryoma and his brother, Ryoga?
Hoi chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
This is cute, I wonder what Echizens mom told him? could improve your spelling, I caught a lot of spelling mistakes which distracted me from the actual story.
anon chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
I really like the short and sweet stories you write :)

However, you really have issues with spelling. I suggest you either get a beta or something to better check your work. It's very distracting and ruins a perfectly good story.
JigokuTenshi834 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Waa _ Loved this one-shot!
Just one thing though, you spelling. It made me cringe. I think you should run it through spell check or something.
Other than that though, it was great!