|Reviews for Pure Impulse|
| DarkCrono15 chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
Wow what an ending to your story! (PS: This is CrimsonMercenary) I hope this isn't the end for Pulse. With OC Superheroes the opportunities are endless with what you can do with them, and I'd love to see more!
My favorite part of this chapter was when you went into One Shot's backstory. I love character depth and think it'd be a great idea if in your future fictions you went into more detail with your characters. This was a very action packed tale which was fantastic but i don't believe it was until this last chapter that we saw clearly what was going through Pulse's head throughout the action...Just my thoughts you decide if they're good.
A good story, and definitely being favorited by me!
| CrimsonMercenary chapter 7 . 8/26/2012
Phew! Pulse got his butt kicked, eh? Oh well, every good hero needs a beat down occasionally. I wonder how he'll get out of this mess!
Not sure how I feel about the inclusion of Batman in this yet, time will tell if it helped the plot or took away from it but i can see it going either way right now.
Interesting chapter, Pulse may have to call someone from the JLA to get out of this one!
| CrimsonMercenary chapter 6 . 8/20/2012
Good chapter! I enjoyed the fight scene between Pulse and...Tank? Or is it "The Indestructible Tank" , eh I don't know...he was a fun villain though! Interesting twist you put having Pulse straight up tell his secret identity to Sarah and Linda, I could see that being an awesome move or not so much, but only time will tell..I have confidence you'll make it work though!
There were quite a few grammatical errors in this chapter and normally I don't really care but a few of them were a bit distracting when trying to read the chapter. There were a few words I think you meant to put in that you missed that made me have to think for a moment and figure out what you were trying to say. Not a huge deal, but if you're like me and you never proof-read your chapters, you may want to re-read this one.
Anyway, I am enjoying this story and glad you keep writing it!
| CrimsonMercenary chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
Best chapter yet! I loved your action scenes and characters. This chapter was longer then the other ones and you were able to really develop Pulse's character...which was great. I also like the potential love triangle thing you may have going with Will, Sarah, and Linda.
Here's one thing you may want to start considering if you haven't already: Will Pulse have a weakness? He is awfully powerful, which is awesome...One-Shot didn't stand a chance! However, we can only read about heroes wiping the floors with bad guys before it gets old...My theory has always been, the more powerful the superhero, the greater the weakness. Just a thought, I'll let you decide if it's a good one!
| CrimsonMercenary chapter 4 . 7/15/2012
Cool! I'm wondering if Linda becomes a love interest for Pulse. Thanks for the quick updates!
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| CrimsonMercenary chapter 3 . 7/12/2012
I still like where this story is going but I think I'm going to agree with the review below me. This chapter could use a little bit more content. Perhaps if it continued Will's conversation with Terry so that we see him tell his friend about his powers?
I like the premise though and still plan on continuing to read it, just thought I'd give my 2 cents!
| The Lady Geek chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
This chapter is to short cuz!
| CrimsonMercenary chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
An interesting story so far! I enjoy that it's in first person. You do a great job writing in that style, I personally find it difficult to write in 1st person, so color me impressed!
Pulse's origin of power was cool too, keep up the good work!