Reviews for I Walk Alone
AndTheCynicsWereOutraged chapter 6 . 7/25/2012
Remarkable story you have in your hand. Genuinely a greatstory, but you may want a beta reader. I'll be glad to correct your Mary sue some may have complained of.
Ok, so if you would like my help please pm me. And also I love it but does dally like her? And "two guys two many" was awesome but who said it?
Love it!
Marii 3
Guest chapter 5 . 7/24/2012
i love this story please up date so thank you:)
anabelle chapter 4 . 7/23/2012
this is awesome plz updAteee
cherry chapter 4 . 7/21/2012
hurryyy update this is great
mary cathrine chapter 4 . 7/21/2012
please update very sooon
isabella chapter 4 . 7/20/2012
this a great story please hurry and update
IcyKaku55 chapter 4 . 7/22/2012
Hey! Really awesome story so dramatic! I can't wait to read more!
Jinling chapter 3 . 7/18/2012
Awww that was sweet
Guest chapter 3 . 7/18/2012
i love this story
Guest chapter 2 . 7/14/2012
i love this story update soon.
bri chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Omg this is sad but really good c:
divine energy chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
I can't even read it!

Try spacing it out, and I'd suggest a beta.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
omg i love this story it is soooooooo good.
Animated Innovation chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
No offence, but this sounds like a classic Mary-sue story. And your writing looks like you really need a beta. If you look under the outsiders comunitys, you'll find a Mary-sue corrections folder. Look under there, and that should probably help your writing.
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