Reviews for Swan Dive
Rebecca Roberts chapter 1 . 4/8
Great job! Impressive potential. Good writing style, just needs a little work (all based on Ch 1). Keep writing!
sherlock holmes chapter 52 . 3/28
While reading the 52nd chapter I felt so happy it made me want a family I never stoped smiling and even burst into laughter at times this was the best fanfic that I have ever read thank you and have a good life
anonomus321 chapter 25 . 3/27
I looove your story can't wait to see how it ends
13SHERLOCKXOXOX chapter 25 . 3/22
disneybrony chapter 52 . 3/18
That was so cute!
Guest chapter 52 . 1/27
amazing! loved every minute of it couldn't of written it any better! please write another x
Guest chapter 23 . 12/14/2014
This was, great you should write more you , expressed theses fine, charaters very well ABOOM! !
Guest chapter 3 . 6/27/2014
Ooh much better as I goes on, found his voice. Fangirling a bit already :)
Guest chapter 2 . 6/27/2014
Hey, as a writer I decided I should be 100% honest. I do love what you have so far, HOWEVER, the Sherlock perspective is a smudge off. Molly is spot on and I love how you've done her part even to the small details. For Sherlock, his actions are on key but I couldn't find his voice. My advice would be to have his character develop throughout the text. You're so close but some of his dialog is questionable. Amazing for your first piece! Email me at if you want any advice or to discuss anything literary. Love it, enjoying my read. I will finish it
Vio404 chapter 52 . 6/25/2014
It is wonderful but it just doesn't sound like him he's too nice even in the beginning
Guest chapter 44 . 5/28/2014
My lord... So.. OOC... It's really good, but.. TBH, I just can't imagine Sherlock crying is all.
Debstev09 chapter 23 . 5/25/2014
Okay I'm can they. Go dress shopping at 6:00am and how can Sherlock let Molly leave with Irene when she's hooked up with Moran?
Aylen chapter 41 . 5/8/2014
Its great story but when you say ya'll it bugs me because it's y'all trust me I'm from the south and that's how you say it but it's a wonderful story thanks for sharing
Riley Margaret chapter 52 . 3/11/2014
I have finish your fanfiction, I'm craving more.
Riley chapter 50 . 3/11/2014
As I am nearing the end of this fanfiction
I would like to thank you
It's beautiful writing and has me hooked
I hope you write more.
No I am begging you to write more of
"Swan Dive"
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