Reviews for Dreams that Haunt
GUEST chapter 16 . 12/31/2013
Guest chapter 16 . 9/18/2013
I don't mean to come off as rude, but since this hasn't been updated since February, I'd like to know If I just wasted my time reading this? It's been a great story so far, but I was so disappointed when I realized it wasn't finished or even updated recently. I hope you can finish. I really want to know how it ends. I hope something serious hasn't kept you from your writing.
Sammi 007 chapter 16 . 7/14/2013
no not a cliffy MORE!xxx
anonkp chapter 16 . 7/2/2013
Oooh, this is getting interesting! I can't believe you stopped here- more please?
anonkp chapter 8 . 6/26/2013
Really good. I liked hearing how Deeks' desire for answers is not just for him but for his mom and grandparents.
anonkp chapter 7 . 6/26/2013
Ah, Sam, the "heart and soul of the team." I remember when I felt that way, before the season finale made me completely change my mind about him. Also, I think your take on Deeks, especially in how his childhood has influenced the man he is now, is really good and interesting.
anonkp chapter 6 . 6/26/2013
Nicely written. The part about the scattering the ashes was touching, and I really liked Deeks' realization at the end.
anonkp chapter 5 . 6/26/2013
I like how protective Callen is being. And that was a nice closing paragraph too.
anonkp chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
Poor Deeks. How awful that they needed to show a picture of his poor dead mother! I liked your observation about how he had never had the experience of family that loved you no matter what, so he worried about how his current family, the team, would react.
Sweet Lu chapter 16 . 6/20/2013
Just reread this story and found it wasn't finished...Do you plan on completing it, or should I just resign myself to never knowing what about a cliffhanger. It's a really good story...and I would love to read the ending.
Guest chapter 16 . 4/17/2013
Guest chapter 16 . 4/6/2013
so what happens?
ICrzy chapter 16 . 3/11/2013
Guest chapter 16 . 2/25/2013
F Maurice chapter 16 . 2/25/2013
Yes, that was a good cliffhanger. So Bennett chose to grab Marty? Interesting. When will Kensi and the others find out? Hope you can get a new laptop soon.
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