|Reviews for Excited? Sex me up!|
| fdsnjhb chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Hello! Well, apart from the continuity error mentioned before, I quite enjoyed it! The only thing is that sometimes you seem to use too much "flowery" language - i.e. you seem to use too many "different" words. I appreciate that you're trying to not just use the same words over and over again etc., but don't be afraid to cut it down so its a bit barer! But apart from that, in a word, HOT. :)
| Dramione762 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
best chappy in the world!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
"feeling every ridge and vein of him" really ? very sensitive ! she absolutly need to go see a gyneco !
"hitting that spot inside her " in missionary pose ? i like you to show me ! in missionary men can only stimulate clitoris (and not very well in my opinion), women need to be on top to found quickly the good angle...
just a porn for teen guy ...
| fantasia-49 chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
oh excellent reallynot too hard but deliciously smut i love it!
| I don't get it chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Your summary says that Hermione's already left for the weekend.
But the her and Draco...
So is Draco a female in your story?
| Cagalli Yula Athha Fangirl chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Yummy! Very well written loved the details.
| tardisbluephoenix chapter 1 . 7/11/2012