Reviews for In Pursuit
keller12917 chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
That is unlike him to hand out compliments or appreciation too often. She better bottle that might be the last one
Nadja chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Another entertaining and well written piece. Thank you!
Tanith2011 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
One of my favorites from you. Love the suspense at the beginning. Such a clever twist to have Steve dreaming of something he clearly was concerned about - Jenny's safety and well being. Then to have her date not working out for a completely different reason must have brought relief for Steve while at the same time it's clear he is sorry when he lets her know his appreciation of having her around. Great job on building a unique and clever plot. The dynamics of both scenes were splendidly delivered with the right tones. It's almost like a musical piece - you have the crescendo then it softens at the end. Well done!
jodm chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Nice little tale highlighting the relationship between Steve and Jenny. You've given a nice description of his usually well-hidden protective nature. It's good to see Jenny in the spotlight, too.