Reviews for Slytherin Marauders
frozen icewolf chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
This story is okay so far. It has potential to grow and get better. I would suggest slowing everything down. We don't even get to know the characters before it's suddenly "five years later". There are also way too many line breaks in such a short chapter. It's confusing when there are line breaks every few paragraphs.
staywondrous chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
chapter one and im sort of confused and i think its a little unrealistic for a five year old to know what cospalying is going to keep reading and hope for the best.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/6/2012
I am really liking this story. Good job
fuck uu chapter 40 . 7/19/2012
that was the most confusing and the crappiest story i have ever read you freak ur the one who deserves to be raped i hope the make you pregnant and slice ur nipples off