Reviews for A Teacher of Sorts - ON HIATUS
WiseOldSoul chapter 13 . 2/25
i dont know if you are still interested in writing for fanfic
but i want to say that i am enjoying this story. i do have
a bit of a constructive criticism though...however, it is
something completely of my opinion and not so much
regarding your grammar but on the story content.
to me, this senior bella appears very pushy. yes, it's true that
she is in love and don't want to lose edward, but she being
the shy naive virgin in the story seems quite uncharacteristic
in this story with her aggressive/assertive pushiness. dont get me
wrong, i am all for assertive bella, i hate the whimpering pathetic one
in the original but imo she appears to be somewhat completely different
than what i would have imagined her to be in your story. she just got her
first kiss for goodness sake and she was all for having sex right then...not good,
would think edward would have been so turned off by that thinking she is
like every other teen ie. jessica stanley...just saying...
another observation, edward seems too sensitive. again, i am all for sensitivity
in men but he seems to be such a coward in this story...sure, he is persuaded
to continue the relationship, but he was quite reluctant and was way to girly
with his thoughts or actions in some parts. besides that, i love the dialogue b/t them
so open and honest and very mature due to bella being mature for her age.
hope she shoots down jake quick and not drag him or lead him on to be friends...
she needs to just cut the cord...
mrscullen922 chapter 13 . 6/28/2014
*Is currently dying for the next chapter*
Animeluvr717 chapter 13 . 11/24/2013
I really get nervous whenever Bella and Edward kiss in school, or talk all lovey dovey. It's kinda unusual that people that haven't caught them yet. LIKE JESSICA! she could be spying on them. Anyways, it's over a month since you updated...please hurry this is really a phenomenal story!
TwilighterSam1989 chapter 13 . 10/6/2013
Please dont send Edward to jail.. I can feel their happiness And love.. Swoons
TwilighterSam1989 chapter 12 . 10/6/2013
Your awesome besides THE Jacob part. And i knew the song right trough THE first line. It was perfect
UnderlinedSmile chapter 13 . 10/6/2013
Oh no, I think your story is perfect so far. I know I probably can't convince you to leave everything the way it is but... you should. Because I think it was really lovely. One of the rare stories lately that was able to put butterflies into my stomach just from reading about their relationship.
Anyway, I'm really looking forward to an update.
TwilighterSam1989 chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
This made me think of a song in glee young girl/ dot stand so close to me
TwilighterSam1989 chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
Is Freaking incredible also good ? :)
TwilighterSam1989 chapter 3 . 10/6/2013
It was amazing..
mrscullen922 chapter 12 . 7/19/2013
love it!
EpitomeOfBella chapter 12 . 7/12/2013
Cannot wait for the next chapter
PrettyPerfect chapter 12 . 7/12/2013
Lol! This is Bella we are talking about here, her and Edward never catch a break. There's always another guy after her... XO
Valentine Rain chapter 12 . 7/12/2013
Can't wait for more! x
thelionismine chapter 12 . 7/11/2013
Amazing chapter! Love it!
Twilight Devote chapter 11 . 7/8/2013
Well I'm glad I bring 'Oomph' to you! lol
I love this chapter. It was wonderful! I liked how it was longer. And everyone Rebels at some moment.. I of course how I rebel is staying up late Stealing Wifi so I can read amazing FanFic's like yours ;D
ANYHOO! You better get your ass in gear and update!
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