Reviews for I Will Do Better
Couture Girl chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I LOVED Voldemort in here! His words, actions and the tone he used with Bellatrix is was all so beautiful, horrifying but so him! And Bellatrix's weakness was saddening but possibly so true. How she was on her knees whispering that she could do better, trying to convince him. Wow, I loved it all. Well done, yours is much better than mine, you'll win for sure!

Much love!

C.G.
lella7 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I really like the way you've written Bellatrix's desperation for approval and her fear at the beginning - it seems just the way she would be after Azkaban. The descriptions of her time within Azkaban were spot on too :) Good job
HedwigBlack chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
I like that you are able to write a human side of Bellatrix. I get the sense that only Voldemort sees it though. I can sense his frustration that she is not the person she was twelve years ago and it bothers him in his own way and for his own twisted reasons. I can imagine her begging as well. Nice job.