|Reviews for I Do|
| fifi2903 chapter 7 . 1/25/2013
Haunting hal is still one of my absolute favourite fanfics, and i love your one-shots...all brilliant and beautifully written senarios. I was starting to lose hope that this was going to get any further so i'm really pleased that you've come back to it.
Although I'm not as engaged with lady jane as i was with izzy (well...she's a pretty hard act to follow!) she's still my second favourite fanfic oc female. I find her really intriguing, love the idea that hal is afraid of her and desperately want to know where this is going. Found the crossover with haunting hal in this chapter strangely exciting! I really hope they will meet again.
Particularly liked the 'you never...attached to your food' line.
Please, please keep writing.
| Funsoup chapter 7 . 1/24/2013
*Taps foot, with arms crossed* I loved the update but you ! You ! ohhhhh :P I suppose I can let it slide this once :)
| Saemay chapter 7 . 1/23/2013
Oh drunk Hal! All full of himself and fully ridiculous. Loved the crossover! How will the stories divulge from here I wonder? Dangerous danger that he now knows of Em...
| tangentially TJ chapter 7 . 1/23/2013
That Em is becoming quite a firecracker! And Hal as malevolent overlord? Nicely done.
| anon chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
this is amazing and i cannot wait to read more!
| camillavirgil chapter 6 . 12/1/2012
I love how neither option (of recruiting David or letting him die human) is good - both choices have (or would have had) tragic consequences.
And the moment when Jane is surrounded by the little kids - chilling. You genuinely had me scared that she'd kill the final child. In fact, I wonder what would have happened if it hadn't been Em...
I also really like how self-centered Jane is - its like in taking Em in she's gained a pet. Her motives aren't purely noble and heroic and that makes the story much more interesting. :)
| MissPinderx chapter 6 . 11/30/2012
I think I died a little when I seen this uploaded LOL You never disappoint :D Love it x Thank you x
| Saemay chapter 6 . 11/29/2012
Quite the turn of events for Lady Jane! Too bad poor Em had to enter the supernatural world... but truly, she was already there. Something tells me this sad turn to a happy end is not... well... the end. Great chapter!
| Funsoup chapter 5 . 10/28/2012
Oh my god this is so amazing ! I love your work so much Shoe
| camillavirgil chapter 5 . 10/27/2012
Oh no! I have a feeling what "making daddy better" will entail and I don't see that ending out well at all!
Can't wait to see how this situation unfolds!
And I had to laugh at obsequious and unnerved Hal.
Glad you're back Shoe! :)
| MissPinderx chapter 5 . 10/26/2012
Ohh I really can't wait for the next chapter :D Wopp Wopp
| brookesey chapter 5 . 10/26/2012
what's going to happen?
Hal is such an old stick in the mud :)) it's why we love him so much lol
| saemay chapter 5 . 10/26/2012
Oh no! Oh no! Knowing you have more chapters but are just sitting on them IS a bit maddening... alas ; ) Whatever will she do?
Too bad to know straight away that Jane realizes Hal hates her but is an interesting look at his past character. Will their tension return to play into this story I wonder?
| Saemay chapter 4 . 10/21/2012
Fully enjoyed getting lost in the story of Lady Jane. Tis a great tie-in / theory of Hal coming to power. And quite the feat to picture him younger, naive and ladder climbing. Though he'd have to have been eh? Can't wait to see where the story goes and how their paths cross again...
| XxxPrettyxxxGirlxxX chapter 4 . 10/20/2012
nice. her sarcasm at the end was good but cliched. 'ive got an estate.' arrogant but fitting.