|Reviews for DBZ Broken Record|
| almostNEET chapter 2 . 8/13/2017
kidney punch! kidney punch! kidney punch!
"stop hitting yourself Vegeta"
| Courtney-chan1 chapter 37 . 7/21/2017
This a really interesting twist to the DBZ universe, I thoroughly enjoyed it. I know you probably aren't going to finish this, but know that your work is appreciated by someone.
| Tanaka fan chapter 1 . 7/3/2017
i really hope that this story will get updated it's really nice
| MariSkep chapter 5 . 5/17/2017
Plots are overrated. Slice of life fun is golden!
| MariSkep chapter 24 . 5/9/2017
Please let the masquerade end, Z-Fighters. You guys aren't even taking on real students. Let someone have some damn fun in the world
| MariSkep chapter 15 . 5/9/2017
"right now Videl was his closest friend."
I wouldn't go that far...
| MariSkep chapter 12 . 5/9/2017
This is why no one in their right mind dates.
You heard me right. It's up to the insane people to keep the species going.
| GoHaNViDeLSoN chapter 1 . 5/4/2017
GOHAN means 'rice' in Japanese , CORRECT?
So lets just fiddle with the 'rice'-infested titles...
TITLES GOHAN'S REACTIONS ( MENTAL THOUGHTS )
some Gohan - Blushes
with Gohan - Smirks
and sour Gohan - Cheeks:faint pink
than Gohan - Highly doubt it
with Gohan - Eager:like a five year old kid
Gohan - Damn! I am not a food and anways who barbeques rice
Gohan - You betcha'
with Gohan - Guess I am in the shoes of Piccolo now
Gohan - Sure his weighted training clothes account for that
Gohan - Right you are
Gohan - I...I...I...I A..a..am S..S..S..o..
Gohan with bitter sauce - I AM NOT A FRIGGIN' FOOD
enough Gohan - Raises his eyebrow , then pulls off his baggy-shirt
Gohan - Seriously doubt about broken bones:I take senzu beans
15.A grain of truth from Gohan - A hard nut to crack: Consult Hercule's spawn
the Gohan - Confused. Scratches the back of his head
me and heart felt Gohan -
Gohan - Awww so cute;wait how can Gohan think while sleeping
Gohan - KI Sensing possible : I can never get lost
source with angry Gohan - Snaps
Gohan - Doubt it:with the way they live in 439 area..'famous' sigh
from Gohan - Accept it or die
dinner with the serving of Gohan - Teeth clenched , hissed : 'Die'
of Gohan - Sure I know that: arigatou gozaimashita
Gohan Bowl - Makes no sense
and Rice - Yum...Yummy
Gohan - Yeah Videl you are on
away Gohan - Dumb staring
Warm Gohan - I am... Hot : 'Interesting'
Gohan - I guess what's the hold-up
Gohan - Will you hurry up already?
bowl of Gohan - Groans : You are a Baka
Old Gohan - Rolls his eyes
original bowl of Gohan - DAMMIT! I AIN'T ANY FOOD
master of cooking Gohan - I will jup off(suicide) the lookout next time
Serving of Master's Rice - Goes 'Super Saiyan Ghost' and suicides
Our beloved Videl brings him back with the Dragonballs only to shove more Rice jokes and puns...
37. Stop SOPA or no more Gohan - SOPA means Stop Online Piracy Act. So the stop
preceeding SOPA is just useless.
Author's Question to Universe : " Hey you aren't from this universe so how come you
know about the SOPA?"
Gohan's response:*shrugs* Guess what, they have a reason to call me 'NERD-BOY'
OR I am 'MR. PERFECT SCORES' in 2.5K Gohan FANFICTIONS.
*** THIS IS THE FIRST FANFIC THAT EMPHASIZES ON A BETTER PURPOSE OF GOHAN'S NAME AND I LOVE IT FOR THAT ... GREAT WORK *** :) : :) :
| zfj chapter 22 . 4/1/2017
I see you have had the "honor" of having A-Man review your chapters... I love the story. Not sure if I reviewed before but it's fantastic!
| Jex expern chapter 37 . 3/22/2017
Please update! Story is too good for us to be left hanging :(. Hope all is well with you!
| Sonic the Saiyan chapter 37 . 2/9/2017
I just spent the past few days binge-reading this entire story, and it's really good! Some minor grammar mistakes here and there, but that's more than easily understandable. The idea of having a threat like Clarity, who are strong by human standards, but just weak enough that even Hercule can hold his own? Genius. I really liked it. Characterizations are great as well, extremely accurate.
Overall, the story really is great. It's kind of a bummer that by the time I found it, it's been dead for a couple years. Please, if it's about this SOPA thing, that went down a long time ago, and we're still here, aren't we? Fanfiction is still perfectly legal, I should know, I have 3 that I am currently updating. I hope that it's just a misunderstanding and that the story isn't dead for good. I really wish I could see it continue. I mean, come on! Videl and Gohan aren't even together yet! Can you please come back and continue the story, or if not, at least give us the wave that it's done? Please?
One last thing. What's with the Rice theme for the chapter names? I am genuinely curious
| zfj chapter 35 . 1/7/2017
Fantastic! First, I'm surprised by the very increasing dragonball-esque storyline. It fits well since Gohan and videl are still kids. I kind of half wish they were their actual ages, but their age in this story fits well with the overall theme. The grammar and spelling mistakes are such a minute problem, I don't know why people get upset about them. With that said, the grammar and spelling is quite good save for a few mistakes. It's the storyline which is incredible and really keeps the reader entertained. I love the relationship building with Gohan and Videl. I like Sharpners and Erasa's characters and I also like how you include others in your story. Thank you so much for the great read.
It's a shame that you haven't updated this story. I hope all is well with you and that you eventually come back to this story.
| Shank-GxV chapter 37 . 7/20/2016
SOPA is dead
I hope the story won't be.
I've read this for the second time. I, and looks like everyone else would, like to see it completed.
| RaiStar chapter 37 . 7/19/2016
Are you ever going to come back to this story?
| fluffly chapter 37 . 7/12/2016
You have the 2nd most reviewed story for DBZ. Less than 4 chapters and you would probably have the most reviewed story.