Reviews for Crestfallen
Lyahn chapter 21 . 8/27/2012
When are you going to do something about the color of Loki's eyes? He knows Barton was controlled, shouldn't he question how that stoped? And why didn't the same metod help with Loki? At the very least, he should let the rest of the Avengers know that is posible that Loki is being controlled, because one of them could kill him, or Harry could die and the rest act before he resurrected, and more to the point, that implies that there is somobody else moving the strings, whom for all Harry knows could very well be there, or coming with the army
Firehedgehog chapter 20 . 8/27/2012
asterisms chapter 21 . 8/27/2012
I loved Harry and Tony's banter in this. It was so fun to read. I can't wait to see where you take this after the fight is over.

When you mentioned the snake I immediately thought of the one Harry set free in the first book. XD Yeah...
I really do love this story, it's awesome.
irezel chapter 21 . 8/27/2012
woooooo! new chapter just after i read the other one. swwwweeeeeeet.
Sofia Ottoman chapter 21 . 8/27/2012
Yay! Brilliant chapter!
Lightning-sama chapter 21 . 8/27/2012
asdfghjkl Perfect chapter is perfect.
irezel chapter 20 . 8/27/2012
3 mmmmmm yes. good chapter! can't wait for the other's reactions!
Guest chapter 20 . 8/27/2012
I'm sorry to hear of your weapons connection dying, but at least you can tell yourself that she died a noble death!
Mickey chapter 20 . 8/27/2012
Love love love it
request chapter 20 . 8/27/2012
PLEASE don't let SHIELD find anything in HP's blood they can use or copy! I hate stories that go that way! Maybe since HP is the MOD, his blood would be unusable or maybe it would cause any machines used on it to explode, torching the sample.
ultima-owner chapter 20 . 8/27/2012
Try to plan better
lkgnbklxf chapter 20 . 8/27/2012
Wow! Angry HP is kind of awesome...GREAT UPDATE!
The Third Biker Scholar chapter 20 . 8/27/2012
awesome chapter. haha, fury was scared, i love it.

n chocolate o.d., hmm? give her a shot of vanilla with cinnamon vodka, she'll be fine. (i want my tom welling/christian bale cabana boys, dammit!)
Lena7213 chapter 20 . 8/27/2012
And the battle for New York and the Earth begins!

And of course Fury uses Harry... At least we still have Coulson!
Genesis chapter 20 . 8/27/2012
good food and drink ... that is an acceptable excuse. nice update.
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