Reviews for Baby Fever
Guest chapter 15 . 9/29/2013
Loved this story, just so perfect. Except I don't think you realize that a flight from Toronto to New York would take 3 hours at most. It probably takes that to drive from one to the other, so it certainly wouldn't be an 18 hour flight. Just as a thought on understanding what you're writing about.

I loved that Daniel's middle name was Elijah, and I predicted it as soon as Clare wouldn't tell Eli what id would be, and had to read over them winning ten thousand dollars about 5 times and just kept smiling. loved it :)
rawrglefargle chapter 15 . 2/17/2013
Love this story.
Liraeyn chapter 10 . 9/5/2012
Okay, I'm at it again, but you can detect the heartbeat as early as 3 weeks. Please do some double-checking of pregnancy facts.
Liraeyn chapter 8 . 9/5/2012
Just fyi, your odds of your baby having a birth defect actually INcrease with age.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/31/2012
u should make a sequel!
Carrie chapter 15 . 7/24/2012
This was a very well written story! :D Awesome ending ! Sad it's over.. D:
XxxImNotOkayxxX chapter 15 . 7/25/2012
WHAT. I MISSED THE WHOLE STORY? ARE YOU DOING A SEQUEL? PLEASE SAY YES.
Olivia chapter 15 . 7/23/2012
I'm crying, because it was so sweet. It was so good. You are so talented and such a good writer, keep writing those good stories (:
Guest chapter 14 . 7/22/2012
uhoh. why do i feel like the writing contest was a fake?
or since its new york something bad will happen?

DONT MAKE ANYTHING BAD HAPPEN. i feel like a part of the story. u should make this into a book
The-HeYa-Couch-Sees-All chapter 15 . 7/23/2012
I can't believe that it's over, I don't want it to be over!
The Cliffhanger Girl chapter 15 . 7/23/2012
This ending chapter was amazing! You're writing was flawless and Eli reassuring Clare at the end was amazing!

*impatienty awaits a sequel* just kidding, but I can't
Wait for the sequel ;*)
eaulby chapter 15 . 7/23/2012
I more than enjoyed it. I loved it. It's truly one of the best fanfics I have read so far. BRAVO! Do a sequel. Do a sequel. (:
JJB88 chapter 15 . 7/23/2012
That was the best fic ever.

Will there be another one?

Also can ya see my Spy fic?
degrassiluver18 chapter 15 . 7/23/2012
Loved it!
KK2014 chapter 14 . 7/22/2012
please continue this is amazing
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