Reviews for Look Right Through Me
SomeoneKnew chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
It's beautiful writing and I love it, butI don't quite understand. Is Gilbert a ghost? Or is he alive or what?
VexenReplica6040 chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
AHHH, IM SCREAMING NO STOP IT. *clams down* That was beautiful, oh my gosh. I loved how you made it seem that, yes, there was something wrong. But it was hard to guess WHAT was wrong. Ah, that was amazing.
MakeSconesNotWar chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
I guessed in the first paragraph that he was dead, didn't wish it to be true, then presumed to sob and curse when it turned out to be true.
Why must you do this?
I mean, I had known and still read on (but that is simply my inner masochist shining through.)
A on the story, besides having my two babies in so much pain.
Abie Lincoln chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
Ok just because I hate sad endings and I'm confused I'm pretending that was a nightmare and Gilbert is still alive if anyone says otherwise I will beat the !#% out of them
Shima Kururi chapter 1 . 1/23/2015
This story is... amazing. *can't bring herself together and cry, out loud*
MissUnderEstimated chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
i thought it really weird at first but then it turned into this fluffy adorable saddening love story thing and i thought it was really good. oh by the way, thanks for the tears. XD
KawaiiDragonDesu chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
Why. How could you do this. How could you do this to me... HOW COULD YOU?!
RAELthedestroyer chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
now im sad and im going to have sad dreams im gonna read a funny fic i made me so sad and depressed im gonna go ;-;
W chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
Oh god I cried -.-"
violonforte chapter 1 . 1/16/2014

This is beautifully written. I really love how you've described everything and wow, I don't think I would've been able to predict it at all, but that was one major twist you've written here! -) This is definitely going to my faves list. As are you. :D
anonymous chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
Wow. Just wow. That made me cry, and it takes a lot to do that. Very good job writing this.
CheetoDorito chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
OMFMB I CRIED FOR SOOOO LONG YOU HAVE NO IDEA This was a great story, its really got my feels running QvQ
BriBenitez chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
I'm crying. I'm dead! That was amazing.
shakespeares chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
I'm really confused.
That was great but I'm confused.
Just the last part.
Was that supposed to crush my soul or brighten my spirits?
Great story, though. Great writing.
deactivated accountkiller chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
I stumbled across this and was a bit reluctant to read something rated 'M' but I have to admit, this has to be one of my favorite stories.
There's a really good suspense throughout the whole piece, finding out that Prussia was actually dead was a shock! You carry through the emotions of the characters beautifully, taking everything step-by-step so that tension builds constantly until the climax. There's plenty to wonder about, Austria's reactions certainly aren't those of a person who's had a fight with their partner. Everyone stays within the realm of being believable; Prussia drinking and not questioning the pain in his forehead, Austria thinking his final exchange with Prussia is a dream. The fight is also excellent pretense, I like how you give their reason for fighting it adds to the whole story making it come to life.
The piece survives without going into every small detail and emotion which is amazing. There's a well-balanced minilism that lets the mind wander and fill in the blanks without just being a sloppy lack of detail. There's a perfect flow that's maintained throughout everything which can sometimes be a challenge when you need to skip to more interesting parts in the story.
Fantastic story, it's some of the best fan fiction I've read.
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