Reviews for Auburn and Gold
Cats-in-blue-glasses chapter 12 . 11/24/2012
Wow! This is getting more and more exciting! I really hope that Tenten won't be forced to pull an Itachi. That would be just tragic. Aside from that, this part really has me wondering:

The darkly-clad shinobi kneeling at his feet bends forward to offer a red-bound scroll, and he takes it while hiding his surprise. Red is reserved for clan children, not nameless orphans. Interesting.

I wonder which clan she belongs to. This is so fascinating! I wish you luck on the next chapter! Belated Happy Thanksgiving!
shirokuromokona chapter 12 . 11/24/2012
Ohhhh, It seems like she's walking down the path of Itachi. He was considered to have "snapped" under pressure and killed his family when he was only killing a treacherous clan. It's sad really. Wonder how it'll work. Thanks for the chapter.
RedEye00 chapter 12 . 11/24/2012
Good chapter. Tenten could probably arrange 'accidents' to take out Orochimaru, Kabuto and Obito while they are still very young. Danzou would be very difficult but should be easier to take out before he gets the bandages. I wonder how Tenten can keep her sanity with everything she knows and trying to keep others from discovering about her?
vantweet chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
i found some inconsistent content.
you wrote: "The last one troubles Tenten and makes her more than a little suspicious, until she calms herself enough to remember that the traitorous clan was murdered when she was six."
but the uchiha massacre took place sometime after sasuke's 7th birthday and as tenten is a year older than him, she had to be about 8 to 9 years old when it happened.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/13/2012
Interesting! I love the latest chapter!
Tenten really doesn't get enough spotlight time!
And goodness, why didn't I review the first time I read the latest chapter?
Either way, I liked Kushina. Her characterization is definitely different from all the others that I've read of her.

THE Bookasaurus Rex chapter 11 . 11/12/2012
Ok wow. Wonderful story

Most authors would do the whole 'suddenly strong character' and I like that you haven't done so. I love how Tenten doesn't get along with everyone, and how she seems to be adjusting well to the new time period she's in.

Also, can't wait for the next chapter. Really, nice job on the story.
I like angst chapter 11 . 10/25/2012
I saw a few of the revierws of this storyies and i have to disagree with the a few of them. I like that you are taking your time and not focusing on super Tenten. She was a chuunin and not a Jounin and I think that the longer she is in this world the more at ease she feels with it. Despite knowing the future in the literal sense she may also be shaping and changing it without even realizing what she is doing. It's one thigns to know abotu history it is quiet another to live it. She may think she knows what happens , but how much of what she learned is based on theories or prejudices. I really like this story and I hope you will continue to explore that subtle differences between the past she thoguht she knew and the oen she is living through. Also, will we meet Minato soon. I'm just a little too curious.
queen-sheep chapter 11 . 10/17/2012
Yeah! I can't wait for the next chapter :)

I like how you had them fighting slightly. It adds a lot of realism into this story!
KawaiPanda chapter 11 . 10/17/2012
I like! I can't wait for more.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/14/2012
CherryPop0120 chapter 11 . 10/13/2012
I've never really expected a tenten time travel fanfic! This is great!
shiro-wolfman-k chapter 11 . 10/13/2012
The premise isn't original, but the way you execute is. I have enjoyed so far this fic, thank you for the effort you put on this work for us, the readers. I certainly appreciate it.
minniemousemom chapter 11 . 10/13/2012
Please keep them coming it is so very very good
Zin chapter 11 . 10/13/2012
I look forward to all your updates, but this drama thing has got me twitching in anticipation.
shirokuromokona chapter 11 . 10/13/2012
I've been waiting for this. I love how Kushina gave them a talking to. Some people need to be given a good slap of reality in their face. Thanks for the chapter. :D
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