|Reviews for Of Albion and Magic|
| Linorien chapter 30 . 7/5/2014
What, there's no more chapters? And we are left not knowing this vision and with Merlin and Aria possibly in danger? NO!
Anyways, I am enjoying this story (though not as much as the first one) but I think that is because these are mostly new characters so it is hard to picture them as much. It is sometimes hard to tell the difference between the children. Not just keeping names straight, but also they sometimes act alike and there aren't many defining traits to separate them. Kaitlyn and Daemon are always well described so I can always pick out those two. I look forward to the next update.
| Linorien chapter 8 . 7/4/2014
Really there is no way Merlin could be too mad at his kids after all of the pranks he has pulled on Arthur and the rest of the knights.
| lunarwitch16 chapter 2 . 9/18/2013
Love this story please come back with more soon!
| LozzaBlueBell x chapter 28 . 12/19/2012
I'm SO sorry I didn't read this sooner :( I haven't read anybody's lately :/ i'm sorry. the chappy was really good tho... MORE MERLIN! lol. did u see season 5 ep 11 last saturday?!
| LozzaBlueBell x chapter 27 . 12/1/2012
Awww... I cried a bit actually... lol. I'm tired and poorly so I'll have to make this quick... Firstly, isn't it supposed to be Gwaine's POV not Daemon's? Secondly, more magic and more MERLIN! Thirdly, update again soon, or u die, lol x
| LozzaBlueBell x chapter 26 . 11/21/2012
NUALA! WHAT HAPPENED TO HER? TELL ME SOMETHING! UPDATE NOOOOOOOOW! :O
Ooooo... Mordred BLUSHED! That was an awesome POV...
More MERLIN AND ARIA AND ARTHUR!
I'm crossing my fingers for Nuala... :/
| LozzaBlueBell x chapter 25 . 11/14/2012
Percival's POV: Interesting... What are they fighting for? I was gonna suggest somet... but it might sound weird. If the shaman woman... tries to kill Aria... is it gonna be in the midst of the fight... so she can't be protected...? ;)
Damien's POV: NOOOOOOOOOO! (Wait... Where's Merlin?) Okay... NOOOOOOOO! I'm begging you NOT to kill anyone... okay? That's is my strongest request xxx
She has to find the true magic inside of her... and I'll just have to see if she can save herself... or get saved...
| LozzaBlueBell x chapter 24 . 11/11/2012
I loved this... yet again. I don't really know what to say... I think this all worked out. What is Baruch then...? He used to be able to be a human... but now he's not? So... he's the animal chasing the kids? How's Morgana gonna get evil though? For a minute the other day, I wondered if she was still in league with Baruch... but she can't be... If Baruch is the beast... what exactly is he? Can't wait to find out x
| LozzaBlueBell x chapter 23 . 11/6/2012
In Lancelot's POV: I like the way you've done this. Lancelot seems very... protective? towards his friends. He must warn them... He sounds like Merlin. He's rubbing off on him :D I like the bird idea. The way he sends messages to and from to his child and her friends. I think the children have to learn a lesson... That they are like their parents. Strength (Gwaine) ... courage (Arthur) ... magic... (Merlin) bravery (Lancelot) ... You should add that xxx (Lancelot was apparently the bravest and most noble, and it says that in a lot of movies I've watched with him in too. So... he's bravery... and a bit of nobility too x
Shaman's POV: I think this character is quite interesting and mysterious. You've done a good job :) I don't want Aria to die... I think Freya getting lost is already disappointing to me. I keep crying when he cries over Freya when she dies. It's just so sad. I also cried when Lancelot died the last time. I'm really glad he's in this story. Anyway, I think Merlin should be come protective of Aria... and Gwaine of Vervain. I think Gwaine and Vervain should marry... They aren't married yet, are they? Aren't they... partners or something...? I think they should anyway... Are Merlin and Aria married actually... I forgot! :O
Nuala's POV: I think this little character and her... brother? It is a girl right... I got confused. I forgot again. A lot of new names to remember. I remember Merlin and Aria's... and Lancelot's... and then the others get mixed up. I gathered Nuala and... her? brother? are Vervain and Gwaine's...? SORRY! :O I just need to catch up a bit. That's the trouble with reading like... 100 fics at once. Anyway, I liked all the description, and the Dark vs. Light... That's nice. I think the children wanting to protect the parents are important... just as the parents are with protecting their kids.
Overall: I actually think you've improved... :) Your writing seemed to addict me, and I truly noticed how much I missed it over the past few silent weeks. Your chapters definitely should be longer! (Not that I'm saying you have to... :) ) Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope school/job/something else... goes well x
| LozzaBlueBell x chapter 22 . 10/6/2012
oooo wht does tht mean? the shaman has decided? hope its somet spooky. did u consider doing tht thing... wht was it? the shaman attack merlin? and arthur gets angry. yes.
| LozzaBlueBell x chapter 21 . 10/2/2012
First thing first... yay. I luv u... dunno y... i just luv ur story x
I felt abit sad when merlin's POV (is tht right?) ended... lol... i luv him...
I liked Vervain's bit too. I don't really know what to say in these reviews... Only that... erm... maybe there could be trouble back at the castle... and the shaman... she may try to attack Aria and Melrin tires to defend her but gets hurt and then arthur and the knigths get involved and OH AWESOME! Please do tht last bit! x
| LozzaBlueBell x chapter 20 . 9/24/2012
Hi. Sorry I take so long to review. I think this story is going well so far, and keep it up x
I know I keep saying "Adults, kids, adults, kids!" all the time, but, if u could check up on camelot abit, and then go back to the adults... cuz i just love merlin and arthur lol...
| sword chapter 20 . 9/23/2012
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| LozzaBlueBell x chapter 18 . 9/11/2012
That was much better! I loved how you got the round table back together! I love Merlin as a king... maybe you could get Merlin to boss around around more and order him to do the cooking for once, LOL! I also liked how Gwen and Morgana faced Arthur with the desicion... decision... ? of the 9 children. In Vervain's bit, I loved the bit about the rose, frozen in winter and waiting for spring. I also liked how Gwaine showed through his son. I loved when you mentioned Gwaine and his daughter playing together like it was just a normal day in life, and not about to go off and leave them. I loved how Gwaine was telling her to cause trouble! I found the last few lines mysterious and I think this chapter was a real improvement! I suggest that when they leave, the children will have a few nightmares, cry for their parents and stuff like that. Also... where ARE they going?
| LozzaBlueBell x chapter 17 . 9/8/2012
I liked it... but I'm sorry. I have to say this, and you may not like it... but I'm just feeling... wrong. There's no real... thing... you know. You recognise Merlin and the others by their personalities, but now they dont have any. Your focused on the children and now im getting bored... :/ i liked ur other stories b cuz they were exciting and... about the MAIN characters, but I understand this is about children, I just can't get over the fact you named it Aithusa. I'm sorry but thats Merlins dragon! God... now theres no use... :'(
Dont get me wrong, i cant help but feel addicted to ur story... but its slowly eating away at me. theres no adults anymore... no banter like in chapter 1 with arthur and merlin... no morgana or gwen anywhere... defo no gaius (is he even alive?!) wht about gwaine and vervain! do the other round table knights even exist? Come on... x