Reviews for Aching Acrimony
Ratonhnhakton chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
...Beautifulll!

Love, I didn't know you made stories such as this. A shame we hadn't meet sooner.

I admire the fact that all of the characters' feeling is easily absorbed deep within me. (Or maybe I'm just too sensitive o.o)

I really wish you could keep on writing and maybe create a plot from the game we both love so dearly :)

SuR
kittykittyhunter chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
Once again, I really enjoyed this chapter. The characterisation was great: I could really feel Date's rage and appreciated how it contrasted with Yukimura's energy. And Kojuro... lol. He was kind of - typical Kojuro! :D

I'm really enjoying the conflict that you're building up. I was hoping that the second chapter would take place in this setting, so yay.

And I adore your vocabulary.
faint chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Holy-! *tears* You- you should continue this- *tears everywhere* ;_; cute and sad
kittykittyhunter chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
;_;

This story is very moving. I shed a tear while reading it.

I love the way you characterised everyone. Date's voice was so clear from the beginning, and Yukimura... well, I heard his voice very clearly, too.

You imagined a very realistic scenario and kept their rivalry, and mutual admiration, true to form. The way you described their battles was great, so visual.

And the promise itself -
/cries

Great story so far.
Star's Roaring Blaze chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I'm crying on the inside but I sadly cant cry on the outside :(. But great story man! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
too sad TTOTT i already cry right now
Naminette chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I liked it, how sad and how beautiful at the same time, all that's I like to find in a fanfic, thank you. I'm curious to discover how you'll continue this