het relationships are straight relationships, opposite sex not what this is

why cant they identify him through his semen?

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Why 18 24 hour timers? Aren't there only 15 people in the Elite and Mortes Harry and Tom? And that's not including Snape, who you didn't show getting one. What are the other ones for? Other than that, this is incredible, this is like my 17th time reading it.

I didn't think this story could get any better and then I read this rewrite. Easily one of the best HP stories and one that I come back to frequently.

I absolutely love this, you are an incredible writer.

I want to thank you for being upfront and honest about the slash part of this story I personally don't like slash because I can't see Harry Potter as a homosexual now that being said I don't have anything against homosexuals or lesbians or anyone of that tilt as some people call it. I personally am heterosexual. now this part is towards the Christians out there that think they have the right to harass and dedicate the homosexual and lesbian Community you don't! the scriptures say that we should tell them of their sin not Badger them harass them and drive them away from God by condemning them and judging them in strict violation of the Lord's laws and instructions! people who do this are only proving that Christians are no better than sinners and is not following the Lord! the scripture specifically State not to judge one another that includes the unsaved so those of you that go around judging homosexuals and lesbians any other people that are part of their Community should be ashamed of yourselves because the only thing you're doing is driving them further away from God and make it harder for them to see the truth to the lesbian and gay community I support your right to choose your lifestyle as you see fit to choose and no one has the right to tell you whether you are doing wrong or not those who do do not represent the Christian way of life they represent the devil and no one else. please do not allow them to discourage you from seeking out the word of God simply because they're a bunch of hypocrites dang this review really did go off the deep end didn't it. I just hate it when people leave reveals like I've seen before bashing homosexuals and lesbians its just not right.

nah sorry couldn't even read through the first chapter. This comment is for future me who will probably wonder why I dropped it. cringe as hell, siding with Voldemort (cause apparently he can't be evil without siding with that looser). cringe "Dumbledore pays friends" plotline.

First of all I love the story, the plot is so gripping and I like how Harry is strong and independent but mostly I just love the hero turned villain plot

I love the story but I would love to see Harry marry Luna!

I just read the warning and irape really sint my thing. But the plot is good so... Eh I guess. I still enjoy it.

I just love your works; you have such a way with words. You're so descriptive and Sang Lys makes all my vengeful, spiteful urges flare in the best ways. 3 If I had to pay for fanfiction, I wouldn't even mind, if it was yours.

All chapters need more proofreading and editing!

Fasinating read kept my attention ,only fault not enough dragons.

Do you write poems by any chance? Since these are very good, accurately describing what everyone of them went through, so great job!
*looks impressed*