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autumn midnights chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I loved this! You're definitely right, it's one of the more normal M&MWPs, lol. You described Susan's emotions really well, and I can picture her feeling that way after the Battle, with her parents and some of her friends gone. I like how you had her travel the world, but keep returning home, and how Wayne was waiting for her both times was just really sweet. I love your characterizations of both Susan and Wayne, and you've given them both realistic personalities that I really enjoyed. I like how their friendship is shown, and you segue into romance very neatly. I like how you showed what happened to the other Hufflepuffs as well in the beginning, and the little mention of Hannah/Ernie being close because I love that pairing, haha. Great job!