Reviews for Why?
ZedSilverkey chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
So sad... :'( jk
Clovera2 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
You're really good! :) keep it up! :D
lizzie-rivers chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Why didn't you tell me you'd written stories? I know I don't like primevel, but i'll still read your work! This was good! You need to write a Harry Potter fanfic.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Oh yeah when Abby was kidnapped by the Mer creature Connor said to Cutter "don't do this!"
SandyLee Potts chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Ahh! Poor Connor!

I don't usually like stories written in the first person but this was fabulous!


(One minor note get your Work checked by a Beta Reader, avoid silly mistakes.