|Reviews for Myosotis|
| Voldy's pink teddy chapter 7 . 1/12
Wonderful story so far! Now I'm definitely worried for Loki's safety, though I don't blame Clint for his vendetta. I hope they get there before Clint gets to him.
The moral debate about responsibility they were having is interesting; how responsible is he, exactly, if memories are a large part of what makes a person who they are, and he doesn't remember anything about his life, let alone his crimes? But as you pointed out, it was still him who did those things, when you put aside all the philosophical nuances...
So many things in your earlier chapters were interesting as well, but I'm going to have trouble covering all of them so I'll just mention the things that stuck out to me the most. For one thing, you've done such a good job with Peter and Gwen and May's characters, and the relationships they have with each other and Loki. The dialogue is entertaining, and the family dynamic that they have developed with Loki is touching. I think you're right; he was very lonely for most of his life, partially out of inclination, but partially because he wasn't accepted by anyone on Asgard outside of his adopted family, and even then, there were still obviously differences in personality that led to huge rifts.
| Rufescent chapter 7 . 1/4
Wow, I am enjoying this story far too much! The characters are superb (I feel so bad for Tony and Loki at the same time, which is conflicting because they caused each other the pain), and this plot is griping. Your writing style is wonderful, as well, and flows very nicely with everything!
Please update as soon as you are able to! Best of luck to you!
| xHowlingWolfx chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Okay, seriously your stories are just... I don't know, perfect? I haven't read alot fanfics with Loki up until your 'Prisoner's Dilemma' and right now I feel like I cannot stop! Your way of writing has that kind of humor to it that makes it VERY pleasant to read and it fits perfectly to any character portrayed. I cannot wait for an update for this story and really hope it will come soon!
| shadesofmidnightsun chapter 7 . 11/2/2013
I'm so happy you updated this (and so mad at gmail for putting the alerts under spam so I didn't get to read it sooner). It's such an interesting story.
| yaoilover6 chapter 7 . 10/22/2013
please be okay loki
| fan girl 666 chapter 7 . 10/3/2013
love the talk Steve and Tony had about Loki and the ending it was a brilliant evil cliff hanger
| SoulMore chapter 6 . 9/24/2013
| fan girl 666 chapter 6 . 9/23/2013
awesome chapter love the first meeting between Tony and Loki
| cara-tanaka chapter 6 . 9/23/2013
Looking forward to more
| shadesofmidnightsun chapter 5 . 5/10/2013
I need more of this like hell!
| SoulMore chapter 5 . 5/2/2013
| Sha-Lin chapter 5 . 4/22/2013
Gaaawd I need updateeeee. Need it. Noooow.
Hahaha seriously, I love thus fic ;) Keep it up sweetie
| That-butt-grabbr chapter 5 . 4/18/2013
Make more please, I love the plot in this, with the amnesia and shizz, and, God, these FEELS.
| random bug chapter 5 . 3/26/2013
nice like it very much keep it going very cute, i like the good loki and peter and gewn nice job update soon.
| BlackStormShadow chapter 5 . 2/17/2013
Loki ... making out with every nurse who's willing ... I can imagine Kaiser!Loki doing that ... but I'm shaking and jittery because I'm thinking over all the ways that a romantic relationship could start between Loki and Tony and how it would faLL APART OMG NO.