Reviews for How Your Heart Beats
4thkage chapter 14 . 1/21
is that it!
end with a kiss!
arghhhhhhhhh...i want Zuko said he love Katara so much...

eventhough i'm very dissappointed with the ending...but...i luv the whole story...
how Zuko actually 'deserve' happiness...

is there a sequel?
zombiekins5948 chapter 14 . 10/24/2015
Fucking yess Finally. I be been waiting for this mOment thank you. I love this. I want more making out out please
ahhhh chapter 14 . 10/18/2015
FINALLY GODDAMN IT THEY KISSED! I feel like it should've happened sooner. Also, I got so excited before reading this story because it "Rated M" and I'm a sucker for that "kinda thing" ;) ;) . With every chapter that passed I was just waiting for them to confess their love for each other and you know... have sex! If you had extended the last chapter just a bit and had them have sex, then I would've forgiven you. But nope!

Anyways, I do like your writing style, and I'm just so glad that the characters didn't get OOC. Great humor too!
oh god chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
One chapter in and I'm laughing so hard already. Great humor! Got me peeing my pants.
Totally Spazz-tastic chapter 11 . 9/22/2015
Can I say that's one of the best "Zuko tells the scar story" renditions I've seen? Especially love that it's not just like Iroh's version. It's a little jumbled, it would be after going into shock. Go you.
2human chapter 14 . 9/5/2015
You suck balls for ending this story like this.
Guest chapter 14 . 8/1/2015
I'm so sad it's over!
The King in White chapter 14 . 6/5/2015
Kinda feels like an unsatisfactory ending. The fic itself was amazing. I really liked a lot of the group dynamics and Zuko's Ozai angst. Would have liked to see some Katara POV though.
zutara chapter 13 . 6/3/2015
Dancer who loves Westerns chapter 14 . 5/23/2015
oh my gosh, I just love this story. You've developed the characters so well. You have to finish it.
PrettyChelsea chapter 1 . 5/21/2015
Kinda funny that Sokka guesses it wrong. Can't for Sokka's advices
Penelope Inkwell chapter 6 . 4/28/2015
Awwwwwww. They had a moment!
And I love Zuko's relationship with Toph, here. It's really precious.
Penelope Inkwell chapter 1 . 4/28/2015
Zuko's joke! I am dying laughing!
Lu chapter 14 . 3/24/2015
Thanks for that! It was funny and very well written. Cheers!
Guest chapter 14 . 10/28/2014
What part of this was fucking mature. It's rated T, I read 14 chapters for a fucking kiss
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