|Reviews for On the Wings of Council|
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/3
'great, pity" man she almost dies, what the hell, and that Tobias, why isn't she pressing charges, he is a madman Pokémon thief, mind Pokémon are just as dangerous as a loaded gun, why isn't the league investigating? You should have thought more on the world bulding and a Dash of reality in this, it is unreal, even the canon has more reality then this fic. Sorry but is what i think. #Nathalia
| WyldClaw chapter 5 . 12/18/2014
will topaz be okay
| Blackpelt chapter 14 . 5/29/2006
cyndi:O.O!that angel dude was Ash!that is so screwed up!wait...is that actually the legend in this story?oh and im not a cyndaquil dont get confused by my umbreon is torturing ash...anywho...your story is possibly the best story ive ever read in the entire time ive been on fanfiction.i laughed i cried and all that corny a girl with the username raichu made a song with the help of sentretcookie for the is awesome!bye for now!
| WyldClaw chapter 2 . 3/16/2006
Yeah! Both Fury and Talon evolved! Great story. I have it on my c2 and i have on my fave authors!
| Okami Kitsune chapter 13 . 4/10/2005
Good good. I read this at TPT!
Here's a character you could use *hint*!
Pokemon: Mightyena, Houndoom, Zangoose, Jolteon, Jumpluff, Chinchou
Family: Morty (brother), Alex (Fiance)
Size: 169 cm or 5'4
Bio: Hailey is Morty's younger sister. She is born with good fortune, the day she was born Ho-Oh flew over Tin Tower. She is a very competetive person who doesn't like to lose. She is next in line to take over the Gym. She aspires to one day meet and catch Raikou and Ho-Oh. She is always out of town on training missions, once she trained in Hoenn with Sydney.
| GameGuardian2x chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
Ah, yes, the one pokemon Ot fic i actually liked... mn...
| klucifer chapter 7 . 10/21/2004
The girl with Kurt is actually his granddaughter.
| Zeher chapter 14 . 10/10/2004
Yep, I'm finally reviewing this. I realized that I've only ACTUALLY reviewed this fic once or twice, and that was under the anonymous name raven 'cause I didn't have an account. Well, just wanted to say that this story rules!
| Estuaree chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
Dang, you've got the imagery down-pat! (it's me!) I just loved Topaz's little 'posse'. It's not all cutesy (COUGHthetvshowCOUGH), but filled with jibes and all around more realistic, the competitiveness and whatnot. Also a nice touch, how their Pokes are so much like them. A description of everyday life, and their home environment is usually something severely lacking in fiction, but definitely not this. I loved Farmer Bucket, and his tribulations with Pidgeots, Spearow and his two less-than-friendly canines. XD A bad habit of mine is skipping over long details, but I didn't miss a single beat in reading your fascinating, entrancing descriptions and events. It's like you're sitting on the Pepperina Tree and describing what's happening, quite glorious, actually .. Woah, hey, did I just see 'Sky Erbacker?' 0_- *blinkblink* woah! Sweetness! XD **weeps with admiration** LOL, I'm so touched you used a name... actually... of mine. XD Getting emotional. Kidding. Another horrible cliche is how EVERY SINGLE POKEMON IS FREAKIN' THE SAME ON THE TEAM! They're all so sweet and comforting and loving- JEEZ! And even the ones that aren't are also cliche, being angry just about being caught or having a trainer instead of picking at the actual faults of the trainer, even jokingly. Fury's just one fiery (no pun intended... really!) gal, someone with real spunk. So human. Even the REAL humans in most fiction are paper-thin (Not that I'm saying I'm any good), let alone their Pokes! I think, overall, your greatest strengths are your choice of words, and how people act. You really dig deep into Topaz's mind. It's almost unnerving XD. Well, onto chapter two! (NO faults here!)
| PersonaJXT chapter 14 . 7/26/2004
yays, go you! _
| PersonaJXT chapter 13 . 7/14/2004
ok, i feel like strangling you cause u got my hopes up by going on and on bout how you might add romance than gave us empathy... keep up the good work i guess...
| PersonaJXT chapter 12 . 7/13/2004
looking at drawings more closely i think its more the outline than the proportions...
| PersonaJXT chapter 11 . 7/13/2004
hmm, in answer to your lil q&a thingy
Q2) Originality 8/10
Character Development 9/10
Q3) Sumalee is kewl cause she knows martial arts
Q4) Fury is a good pokemon _
Q5) Your pokemon are kewl, they prolly are good enough to be in their own league, i wouldn't use em because i stick to original and i have no creativity, and i only create new ones if i absolutely have to
Q6) When you say Echotrance special i'm assuming your talking bout your echotrance trilogy, yes i liked it cause it was a well written story with good plot and stuff
Q7) Personally i don't ever like death cause its not a good thing but the swearing stuff and violence is fine, though for the graphic details i'm iffy on cause i don't want to read about the details of a piece of animal waste...
Q8) Topaz/Angel cause it just sounds interesting
Q9) Whatever is fine, switching out should be done on regular basis to ensure all pokemon are well trained, should have like three main ones though, maybe Fury and the two bird pokemon
Q10) Your art is way better than anything i can do so i'm not the best person to answer this question but i'd say its good though some of the porportions are slightly off
| PersonaJXT chapter 10 . 7/13/2004
great writing skills
| PersonaJXT chapter 9 . 7/13/2004
in fact, great story