Reviews for A Forbidden Love
Cooljoe64 chapter 7 . 6/4/2013
Look forward to the sequel
Nefertirix chapter 7 . 5/30/2013
What?! 8O You can't do this to people! :'(
Tonton7 chapter 7 . 4/12/2013
This was amazing story...!
I love Lester/Jess fic, and this was the best Lester/Jess for me!
I really want to read next story:)
(I am Japanese, so my English is poor...sorry;()
Mijo54 chapter 7 . 11/24/2012
J'espère bien qu'il y aura une suite à cette histoire ! vous ne pouvez pas nous laisser comme çà !
Bien sûr que l'amour est possible entre eux et c'est une vieille (pas trop quand même !) dame qui vous le dit ! j'attends une suite avec impatience ainsi qu'à toutes vos histoires Primeval !
J'aime que Jess ait le couage de dire à Lester qu'elle l'aime et que Lester avoue aussi son amour mais il ne leur sera pas facile de faire face aux autres !
à bientot de vous lire !
Mijo54 chapter 6 . 11/24/2012
Amusant que ce soit Becker qui lui dise comment agir avec Lester ! Mais Jess n'éprouve-t-elle plus rien pour le beau Capitaine ? et lui serait-il secrètement amoureux de Jess?
à bientôt de vous lire !
Cehsja chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Usually I love the Lester/Jess pairing as a "father/daughter" type but this works really well and I'm enjoying your story
Guest chapter 6 . 10/27/2012
Good thing Abby is back keeping the creatures happy and the electricity is back on. No reason for the animals to try escaping now
Guest chapter 3 . 10/27/2012
Just because the electricity is cut off doesn't mean predators van get in. In fact, they should be more about the creatures inside the ARC.

If no one turns the power back on, the beasts in the menagerie will start to panic, many will try to break out and a few may even succeed. Then they'll really be in trouble.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/27/2012
It's spelt ARC not "Ark" or "Arc"

Plus they weren't tapped inside. Before the future predators infiltrated the ARC they could easily have left. True once the predators got in they were stranded but not before
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
I always though their best option was to head straight to the menagerie. If they can avoid detection and reach Abby's laboratory they'll be ok

Then, they can seal and barricade the titanium door before moving through the pressure controlled gates into the animal section. Inside they can go and hide inside an empty holding pen.

If one of more of the predators breaks into Abbys lab, entering the menagerie will be more difficult. Even if they get inside, Lester can use the control pad to release the mammoth and the Tyrannosaurus.

The two giants will have no trouble takings out all the predators then he can quickly take them out with his EMD.

Then when Abby and the others get back, they can return the creatures back to their paddocks before either wakes up.
TheMusicKnows chapter 6 . 10/27/2012
Good job...interesting pairing tho

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TheMusicKnows chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
Very interesting...x
Mijo54 chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
Dur, dur, la gueule de bois ! dure introspection de la part de Lester ! pourquoi la fuite de Jess ?
à bientôt de vous lire !
Mijo54 chapter 4 . 10/6/2012
Jess est une coquine !mais ne va-t-elle pas regretter son baiser, même et surtout s'il était parfait ?
à bientôt de vous lire !
Guest chapter 3 . 8/19/2012
Really good story :)
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