Reviews for The Approaching Battle
StorybrookeResident chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Dear yelloweeeee,

I am a big fan of "The Hobbit" and I love spin-offs of my favorite characters. Thorin was not my favorite character in the book, but you made me care for him so much more. The emotion you put into this story was amazing. Keep up the good work!
DarkJackal chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Waahh! Poor Thorin! One tragedy after another. Love him preparing for battle.
lizajay12 chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Lovely description of Thorin preparing for battle, yelloweeee I think the most recent photos of Thorin will inspire a lot of writers, LOL!

I'm glad you've woven your story around the coming of the dragon. This would have been a significant and traumatic moment in Thorin's young life and helps to explain the person he became. And yet, Tolkien tells us so few details. Still, it leaves more room for fanfic writers to imagine their own version and I'm glad you introduced Thorin's personal losses!

Thank you for this story, yelloweeee!