Light is such a tsundere. It's adorable!

I can't

Just deny everything

I thought he was goung to say "im L" instead of "i love you"

I think that this was the best Death note AU fanfiction I have ever read.

Dang it! I liked Mikami...although I totally suspected him for quite a while(coughtwochapterscough)...XD

WHY CAN'T PENBER LIVE FOR ONCE JESUS CRYST.

Me encanto fue hermoso uno de las mejores historias que leido y he leido bastantes, gracias por compartir y por favor sigue escribiendo sobre este par, gracias

Reading chapter 13 at the dinner table was interesting to say the least. :)

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I don't like Misa at all. I'm sorry, but I ship L and Light too much to actually give her any thought. she's annoying anyway

OMG this fic is so fucking amazing it's rare to actually find well written fanfics that have smut in them
this is the first l x light fanfiction that I've found that is actually quality work well fucking done

To be honest I was really liking this story, like LOVING it actually, but this chapter made me feel very uncomfortable. So basically L is no better than Mikami and Light is nothing more than a prize to be won. It's a shame cause I was really routing for him and I couldn't wait till Light admitted his feelings, but now I'm already sad of the results. This was basically rape considering Light was given a date rape drug, and instead of waiting for Light to be coherent and consensual, L just did as he pleased cause he 'could not control himself'. That's the saddest excuse in the book, and so not L's personality. The worlds greatest detective just committed a severe crime to the one other person he 'respects' and considers to be on 'his level'. It's sucks cause this story had so much potential.

*Also please put a warning either in the description of your story or in the beginning of this chapter, so that others know what they're getting into beforehand.

*WARNING: THIS STORY INVOLVES RAPE*
I didn't even read this yet, but after seeing people's comments about the rape scene, I'm definitely not going to. It's not a preference of mine at all, but it's your story and you can write it as you please but seriously warn people first. Not cool.

Wow...
I love it ;) L and Light are so cute together, especially the way you write them. Your story has great romance with an exciting plot, and was really fun to read. Thanks for your hard work writing this!