|Reviews for Love Has No Rhyme and No Reason|
| ChristinaW66 chapter 22 . 2/16
I have been reading your stories since discovering Fanfiction last summer. You are one of my favorite authors. I have loved this story from the beginning, and was excited to see more chapters. I look forward to more!
| LovelyStardust29 chapter 23 . 2/3
I was delighted to see another chapter from you, and, as always, you did not disappoint. Señor Calvillo seems a spirited character, and I loved him helping Diego & Victoria "take out the trash." :) The fight scene was very well done and something I could definitely picture having happened on the series itself. Watching Diego use his feigned bookish nature to ensnare the vaqueros made me smile. As always, I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.
| Coucherdesoleil chapter 23 . 1/30
(This review may appear a second time in a truncated version, as my earlier attempt to post it got eaten.)
You updated! I was really looking forward to the continuation of this fic. :-)
I like Senor Calvillo, he seems like an interesting new character. Another great chapter!
| KatieZfan chapter 23 . 1/29
LaC- Love the new man - Senor Calvilla seems like just the man for the job! "I think I'll start by taking out the trash." !Love it! I liked the part about Victoria's learning self defense also. Good thing for her to know, and very well written (by you). :D I went back and read "Games & Gifts" -couldn't remember what might have been changed but it was a wonderful chapter! Read "After-Annie" again, I always marvel at what a good writer you are! Very good character development - I feel like I can really see V & D and their conversations (and with others too). Keep it coming please! Such a great story!
| arty60 chapter 23 . 1/29
Enjoyed that! Thanks for updating!
| DietMJ chapter 23 . 1/29
Nice to see a new chapter. I like the new character. Diego's insight about himself was rather enlightening- it was great how he could help defend Victoria with a book rather than the sword- Love that quote, too!
| smithcrafter chapter 22 . 10/5/2013
There's nothing wrong with light and fluffy. You're using it to help develop the characters and their attitudes. Uninspiring episodes are a PAIN to get past.
| LovelyStardust29 chapter 22 . 9/26/2013
I'm very glad to see another chapter so quickly, and one that is so well done. :) I don't blame you for not using much from the "They Call Her Annie" episode - I wasn't much of a fan of that character either, or the episode itself, but I understand the need to mention it for continuity's sake. I continue to love their flirtation, and their "self defense lesson." :) You also did well with their discussion about what they are wanting from their marriage - an important conversation, and not surprisingly, they seem to be on the same page. I eagerly look forward to more of their courtship, and to the upcoming marriage chapters.
| KatieZfan chapter 22 . 9/26/2013
I agree with CrazyJan & MJF- love reading the dialogue between them. Very natural and yet flirtatious. I love this kind of story :D And I too like having Victoria "in" on the secret and seeing their relationship grow. Can't wait to see the next one!
| CrazyJan57 chapter 22 . 9/25/2013
well their self defence lesson didn't last long, did it? - I don't think I would be able to concentrate either :)
I enjoyed their talk about what they wanted in life and marriage and not keeping secrets and that they were being honest with each other. It was also interesting to hear Victoria explain the reasons for her father and brothers leaving her alone with the tavern after the death of her mother.
| mjf2468 chapter 22 . 9/25/2013
I love their flirting and don't mind at all the focus on just them. Love this chapter! It was very sweet. I am so very glad you have been writing these! It keeps getting more interesting having Victoria in on the secret, and seeing how that would've changed things. Love it!
| KatieZfan chapter 21 . 9/19/2013
LaCorelli - please don't leave us hanging! I love your Zorro stories (and music videos!). I've just started posting reviews since joining a little while ago, but I've been reading the stories for several months. LOVE your writing - please give us another chapter soon!
| Coucherdesoleil chapter 21 . 9/16/2013
You updated! :-)
I loved this chapter -what a nice little interlude. Again, very well done.
Please keep writing, I know I myself am eagerly awaiting each installment!
| DietMJ chapter 21 . 9/12/2013
Fluff can be good sometimes! I can't imagine Diego tolerating a mediocre chess game unless it was with Victoria and her charms. It's nice to see them just "be-ing" rather than always having drama. So Don Alejandro' still in the dark about Zorro. When he does find out, sparks are going to fly!
| LovelyStardust29 chapter 21 . 9/11/2013
I thought this was very lovely and sweet. I enjoyed Diego and Victoria's chess game, and always love any opportunity that you give them to flirt. :) I also loved the gift from Alejandro to Victoria, and the conversation between Diego and Alejandro about Senora Sinestra. Seeing Diego squirm a bit about that episode (even though he has no reason to feel guilty) and about continuing to remain silent about his alter ego with his father was a fun read. Well done, my friend, and good to see this next chapter from you!