Reviews for Applejack is Pregnant
Ema Smith chapter 1 . 6/27
That chapter was OK... But the grammer was a bit off
Jocelyn Spry chapter 2 . 6/9
That was exciting! But why did you cut it short when they got to the hospital?!
Jocelyn Spry chapter 1 . 6/9
It was good, but I thought Rarity and Spike were going to have a baby and be a couple because I watch a lot of videos saying that.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8
okay I won't whine if you don't wan't me to
Guest chapter 2 . 5/7
you need to check grammar sorry but I don't like it much
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7
you might need to check your spelling and grammar but I like it
Guest chapter 2 . 4/5
What only 2 chapters
hi chapter 2 . 3/28
hi
DarkWarrior09 chapter 2 . 2/3
Great storyline overall, but I suggest you work on your grammar a bit!
cutiemarkluna chapter 2 . 1/25
rubbish...
lookingaheadofu chapter 2 . 12/31/2014
You were using incorrect words for certain parts of your story like where there should be 'in' you put an 'on'. Where there should be a 'caught ' there is a ' catch' in its place. The story itself is not terrible but these things made me irritated while reading it. I hope you get better in the future and fix these small inconveniences in your later, stories thank you.
Liza chapter 2 . 12/17/2014
It's great.I want continuation!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
what? wow asome
Guest chapter 2 . 11/24/2014
is the baby a boy or girl if girl name elsa if boy name Tegan yayyyyyyyyyy!
Autumn Cortes chapter 2 . 10/18/2014
When will the next part come out
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