Reviews for It was his mistake
jav5683 chapter 24 . 1/26
Hi love this story just wondering if you were going to finishing it, because it is a great story,
chris1970 chapter 24 . 1/18
Hi I just just wondering if you were gonna be updating this story or finishing it, because it is a great story,
Guest chapter 16 . 12/2/2014
ok from what I have read you should said that it is jasper and bella story first then Edward come in layer but from what read the all story is all the place one minter it tell you that she has finished school then it jumper back to when she was in school so I am not happy with the story so far sorry
XoPri24 chapter 24 . 12/3/2014
I can't wait until Edward enters into the story..and how Bella reacts to seeing Alice (from what i read in the first chapter)
Corr5092 chapter 24 . 12/2/2014
update soon please
Leeshaann chapter 24 . 11/22/2014
please update
FrannieSage chapter 24 . 11/16/2014
I love the way the story is narrated and the storyline itself! When is the next update? This story is to amazing to abandon
michigangal0223 chapter 24 . 11/15/2014
that's mess up :(
MaryKitty chapter 24 . 10/29/2014
OMG I defintely need you to update soon! Evil alice stories are my absolute favorite...and you left it at such a cliffy! Cant wait to keep reading
SadRomantics chapter 24 . 10/20/2014
Update soon please! This is so good and I really want to get to present day with Edward.
Iteachu4600 chapter 24 . 10/15/2014
Please update soon. Alice and Jasper are disgusting she was picking up her wedding dress and they're screwing in her bed. I hope they suffer together forever. I'm taking for little tibits that Rosalie took Bella's side.
Guest chapter 24 . 9/19/2014
I finish this in 24 hours. This story is very addicting. Please please update soon.
Guest chapter 24 . 9/13/2014
Jinx095 chapter 24 . 9/13/2014
Oh my gosh! I absolutely love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update again soon!
Guest chapter 24 . 8/30/2014
In her bed!? who the fuck does that I hope that you get to the part where bella beats their asses fast because I'm losing it here
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