Reviews for Surprise
MTBlack chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Oh, what a fantastic little piece this is! :) Absolutely adorable, I think just Lian's description helped to change the tense atmosphere between Jade and Artemis. By the way, I loved them interacting with each other, and I can totally imagine Artemis jumping at Jade's throat for keeping the secret for so long :)

I think that as well as you can do with Chesh and Roy, you can write a very IC Artemis :) Wally didn't say much in this but as in The Difference he is very Wally :)

I'm really looking forward to see something like this on the show :) Artemis/Jade reunion and the introduction of Lian to everybody! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
This was a great follow up story to reunion . I love Wally and Artemis , Jade , Roy , and Lian all getting together as a family its nice . You should do a Thanksgiving story with the whole family, Paula , Iris , Barry and Bart their too . Feel free to use that if you want . You're a great writer I love your stories .
Keepmovingforwar chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
d2- awesome!
Melissa Black13 chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
I really like this! Super cute with a hint of angst! Great job! :-)
Irenerb chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Love it B)