|Reviews for Going Against the Storm|
| janirafey chapter 6 . 7/25/2012
Wonderful chapter, beautifully written with lots of detail, you've left me with no un-answered questions. :) Please keep up this fabulous writing. :)
| latdh1 chapter 6 . 7/24/2012
will emmett always be able to control harry
| Annabelles-Snowbell chapter 6 . 7/24/2012
oh poor harry! i like the explanation you gave on the prophacy having to do with the baby and voldimort. update soon
| loyalwolf21 chapter 5 . 7/21/2012
this is a great story! i like how the dominate and sub is made ive seen far to many dom and sub stories where its a over bearing dom and meek sub. i cant wait to see where this story goes. just a thought but are you going to make this a harry/Emmett/Jacob fic? that would be amazing there are like none of those. the way harry acted towards Jacob just made me think. anyway this is great cant wait for the next chapter!
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
... What ?
Chap 4 is confusing.
If you don't thread carefully, this fic'll go from intriguing to dreadfully awfull.
I'm not an avid fan of slash but like it when well written. We come from a possible near-cannon AU to a possible "Hey it's a senseless slash fic where it doesn't matter what happen if there male on male action".
Will there be character POV or even developpement ? We've seen nearly no interaction between the cullen and Ha-Regulus (one of the intriguing point in fact) for exemple.
Hope there is a real plot behind this.
Thanks for the work
| Banedon chapter 5 . 7/20/2012
... What ?
This chapter is confusing. We had a strange but intriguing story, a possible nearly canon AU.
Now we have a possible "Plot ? This is slash" kind of story.
Where are character development ? Heck, where are the interactions between the Cullen and Harry (or Regulus, that's one of the intriguing points) ?
Is Harry still an emotionally stunted teen ? How would he just jump in Emmett's arms in that case ? Even without all that, where is the fluff ? The realization that Harry doesn't really want to rebel against Emmett ? It's not the kind of things that's just decided, it must be realized and tested. We don't have any emotional buildup ..
There are still lots of unanswered questions and plot possibilities but with this chap you'll have difficulties. For example, you've reduced the potential antagonists (Will have to be local menace or long range action. Either long range Susan or local wolf rival for Emmett for the moment).
Thread carefully, it would be a waste to see that fic fall into the "universe, logic and sense don't matter if we have only male/male relationships" category (that i also call crap slash). Romances must be well written, especially slash since those 'ships goes against societal conventions in most places ...
Thanks for the work
PS : Had to rewrite that review, the new system is crappy.
| Elfin69 chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
I hope that Susan does not cause more trouble for Regulus. This was great.
| GrimCharmer chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
this is so AU ...man Susan is such a b**ch she needs to open her mind.
| Kaylen Cooper chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
| Marcus1233 chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
Hnnn...I'm somewhat confused...exactly why are Harry and Co pro-pure blood? All the acts, restricting the muggleborns and half bloods...I can the whole denying those unworthy but you seemed to only point out the latter and not the former. Aren't purebloods mostly on the enemy's side in the last war?
And the half-breed? Taking away their magic when they are born...I get the whole educating them in their creature inheritance... but the former? They were given magic for a reason, right? So does that mean, Teddy's magic would be bound and taken if he was alive?
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/18/2012
Great job and I loved Moody's last comment! I can't wait for more!
| TheGirlofTigers chapter 5 . 7/18/2012
I love it.
| yugutenia chapter 5 . 7/18/2012
I won's bite.. anymore... I like that, not for me, but u like it...
Good chapter, i dont think that its what Dumbledore wont, he looks equally every student, but i think that the Harry's Slytherin side its coming to surface...
| Exolibris chapter 5 . 7/18/2012
Interesting. I like the direction you're going into.
| little-bast chapter 5 . 7/18/2012
Interesting Chapter...Keep them coming!
I agree with Blaise Susan has no right to be that way to Harry.. sure her friends died but so did his and he was the ONE that had to defeat Voldemort she didn't...
Harry wasn't responsible for the deaths of the fighters and deserves a break!
Looking foward to your next chapter...
Can't wait to see if Susan tries to rally the population against him but fails...
Hoping for an update soon...