Reviews for The Lone Hawke
CommanderCousland chapter 6 . 8/23/2014
Seems pretty interesting so far and it's well written! Can't wait for your next update!
Guest chapter 6 . 6/30/2013
I love love LOVE this! I know it's been a few months but I really hope this isn't discontinued? Looking forward to the next chapter!
lagoosegirl chapter 6 . 6/28/2013
Ahhh I love this! I love how you write Butch! 3
Pool-Sempai chapter 6 . 6/22/2013
This story is very captivating, I cannot wait until the next chapter. I hope you update again soon enough.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/28/2013
actually, i like the introduction of mason, breaking away further from the fallout one man show. i see its been awhile since you updated but i hope like hell you keep at it! if you need a reason to write, besides for yoruself, know that i am checking with great interest! :D btw, i hope my reviews about character development help for your future chapters. since i dont log in, ill just sign these things. keep it up!

-duck
Guest chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
Good. I am glad this isn't "just another fallout fan fiction" and has it's own story on some level. Already you established the points to make a good story. I eagerly await to see what you will do with them.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/28/2013
actually, this made two and two equal four nicely. i am glad you went with what i said about developing characters. This chapter could be considered rushed but the transition and the summary pulled it off nicely. DO NOT neglect your characters now that you are getting to the meat of your story. not meaning anything negative, but i hope liz gets hit pretty badly early in the wasteland adventures, making her learn how to survive when she only knows how to hack, shoot a bb gun, and pick locks. getting knocked down a few times will usually make for more interesting characters and growth. i eagerly look forward to what you do with next chapter.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/28/2013
Depending on what cally777 said, don't fret over the story being too "fluffy" as you are developing characters. When I read a fan fiction, i get annoyed when an author skimps on the character development for the sake of getting a lot of story done. NOTHING is more boring than reading a story that does not bring interest to it's antagonist nor it's protagonist. The first chunk of a good story has lots of fluff about characters, getting you interested in him, his soon to be trials, emotional stability, etc. you are doing great, keep this up! I am curious at what point you will bring in the fallout story as a transition. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Thank you for not neutering Butch to make him elegible for romance. I like that you even put the chemistry in play and made it very possible for the characters to be natural about it. I'll be keeping tabs on your stories. Hope to see you conclude the story!
Lola chapter 6 . 5/1/2013
This is so good! I love how well you're writing the characters and sticking to the plot without just retelling the story! Can't wait for more updates. :)
Jayden4U chapter 6 . 4/30/2013
Update! Update! I really like this story! You are a fantastic writer and I am dying to see how this story plays out! Please update soon!
Ren chapter 6 . 4/25/2013
Ahhh! I'm so happy that you've decided to continue this story! The chapter didn't feel choppy or rushed to me, so don't worry yourself! Can't wait to see what you've got planned! :D
Leah chapter 6 . 4/12/2013
ohmygod
this story is so good ;-;
I love your writing style and how the story is rolling along, please continue it!
: )
Elle chapter 6 . 3/29/2013
Enjoying this, so please update :) hehe. It's interesting to see the bitter changes in Hawke's characterization.
kiwilynn13 chapter 6 . 3/20/2013
FINALLY an update! Loved it and can't wait for more!
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