Reviews for Toni Haruno
25BAM50 chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
I like your story and happy late birthday and I think you should continue this story its good
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 3 . 9/23/2012
Good chapter and a Stymphilian bird is a creature from Greek mythology that is looks like a bigger version of a pigeon, has a solid gold beak, gold-ish feathers, and attack indiscrimanetely at anything, they typically fly in packs and are very fast-Hercules defeated them by using the sound of a large bell to spook them away from a city they were plaquing.
narusakufan1985 chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
This is a good story. Please continue. Naruto and Sakura forever.
TMariee chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Gahhh I'm the author and didn't realize how poorly written this was I'm sorry you guys.
Legend of Derpy chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
You need to, for one, show, not tell. SHOW us Naruto kissing Saskue, don't just rattle it off. SHOW us the eraser falling on sensei.

Second, you need to get a grammar/spell check for this story, since your grammar is not the greatest. You are missing periods and commas in this. Might I suggest hiring a beta reader to help you out?

Xx Write on, keep calm, and carry on! The Legend of Derpy, Proud Member of Critics United xX