Reviews for Protecting the Last Horcrux
Sakura Lisel chapter 13 . 1/5
Wait, so exactly WHAT did Harry make her 'forget' exactly with the obliviate spell? Her ENTIRE life with false memories in place, or just all the BAD stuff that's currently happened since meeting Voldemort? will she even remember how and why she's currently pregnant? *lol* What's she going to actually remember when she finally wakes up?
Sakura Lisel chapter 14 . 1/5
*lol* Viv should give up anyways despite the begging and pleading of the nurses at the hospital. Its her choice, and just because the nurses can't stand his constant screaming, should mean she should. Tell them to keep him until Social Services or whatever came to pick him up, as they SHOULD be doing since she's giving up all rights to him. So what if the 'boy needs his mother' like the nurses said? He'll get a NEW mother, if anyone can handle his constant screeching long enough. *lol* Unless he's crying because he's somehow missing the dad who wasn't around when he was born as the reason he's crying no matter what his mom does to shut him up. She should consider silencing spells if she can cast it.
Sakura Lisel chapter 6 . 12/24/2015
Wait so HOW did Harry and the others find out about Vivian? Who told them and why? What do they know about her BEYOND her being pregnant and Voldemort wanting somebody whos a half demon witch that lives in America? Plus if THEY had gotten to her first, what were they planning to do exactly to a American half demon-witch girl who, for all they knew, knows NOTHING about Voldemort and had no idea why a British dark lord wanted her for? Plus if they got any info on her family, they'd know her family are supposed to be the GOOD guys who PROTECT people from evil things. *lol*
Sakura Lisel chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
Wait why didn't she fight back and HEX Tom before he raped her? Sure I get he slipped her a potion to make her vulnersble and unable to PHYSICALLY fight back or even move her body. But she could still talk. Shes a Halliewell-Turner, so why didn't she use her VOICE and come up with a verbal rhyming spell or whatever, to knock back Tom? Plus with her demon powers combined with potential Charmed One Powers exactly what did that potion 'block' since Tom didn't even KNOW what she was when he slipped her the potion. It was designed to incapitate a NORMAL witch or person wasn't it? *lol*
andersoncaseylee246 chapter 8 . 2/9/2015
Okay bring phoebe back to good and bring Prue, piper and Paige back to life somehow.
dustin evans chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
your story are very good i like how u start the story and end it :) good luck writing more