|Reviews for Before a Fall|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
I love it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Awwww! Psycho Daddy is proud. Psycho, but proud.
| Katherine chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
I love the whole concept of this!
| ersny chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Wow! Totally loved it! I like how you displayed Ra's with his usual calmness and somewhat intimidating air, but subtlety showed that he still has fatherly feelings and still loves his child. Really great. :)
| CampionSayn chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Ah, Ra's not being a completely and utterly worthless stage parent to a tiny!Talia. These sorts of things don't usually go well for writers (how can you keep someone like Ra's a in character when you need to give him Emotion?) but you pulled it off beautifully! He doesn't punish his daughter, he gets a better portrait painted of her and punishes the guards for almost losing his baby girl in a cave. But creepy and sweet, just the way it's supposed to be with this fussed up family! Yay for you!
PS: See, I told you I'd look over more stuff. :)
| x-Goody2Shoes-x chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
You really captured the relationship Ra's al Gul and Talia have - her determination to please and obey versus her free spirit, plus his dissaponitment at her disobeyment tampered with his pleasure at her skill. An interesting, in character work. Well done!
| Dextra2 chapter 1 . 7/13/2012