Reviews for Dont make a promise, you cant keep
Minpins chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
yippa
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Where is the brotherly-sister love ?
102Tex102 chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
if you do a crossover between halo and gears...i'd be the happiest reviewer ever! :)
Guest chapter 9 . 8/26/2012
woah aces lost memory cool. err if u dont mind could u post ur xbox add in ur next chap :D
XxZeldaxAnimusxX chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
It Is An Amazing Story I Always Wanted To Read An Story Like This !
Marie01 chapter 6 . 7/27/2012
Aw, what a cute story so far :3 lol. Please continue :)
Babylon1914 chapter 8 . 7/28/2012
more more MORE! lol
Guest chapter 6 . 7/26/2012
nice he finally told her. have u seen gow judgement overunn game gameplay. by tthe way do you have aa xbox add if u do put it in ur next chap and ill add u
Guest chapter 6 . 7/26/2012
nice he told ger . have u seen gow judegement overun gameply btw if u have a xbox add put it in ur next chap and i will add u.
Babylon1914 chapter 6 . 7/26/2012
awwww mesa loved it lol but i want more though lol plz continue
GOWFREAK chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
(cries) that was amazing! Curse these cliffhangers. Any way that last sentence was just fantastic right there. Please please please update soon. Like tomorrow...maybe.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
whoo
nicee chap
Babylon1914 chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
like i said last time, FAMILY REUNION TIMMMEEEE! Oh pretty plz more chapters
Itachi5432 chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
THAT WAS AMAZING SO MORE! MORE STORIES
Guest chapter 4 . 7/22/2012
This is terrible and you should feel terrible.
Your grammar is appalling, the plot sucks and your characterisation is more off than three year old cheese. 1/10 would not read again.
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