So this story is beautiful and touching and I thought it was going to break my heart in places. I'll probably have to go back and read it again to absorb all the details - I wanted to know what was going to happen next, so I may have been reading a little faster than I ought. Oh, and then the Epilogue made me nearly piss myself laughing. (I did genuinely laugh out loud at Severus' complaint about Fawkes "bursting into being".) Anyway, thanks for writing it, I really enjoyed reading it. :)

This is just amazing 3 I'm pretty sure I bawled my eyes out towards the end. But gosh was it heartbreaking. This is an amazing fanfic though. Their love, so strong, so pure, so beautiful.

this fic is "formidable" i loved it thank you. i really hope you'll write a lot of one shots, i can't wait for them! i hope they come soon

WHY must all good thing come to an end? I am very upset right now, such a good story, and a good ending and you totally took the patronus thing and made it your own - which was a really good solution, by the way.
This will get a spot in my fave list!

Sorry I forgot a word : "I want you to know" *
And I signed up on this website to follow you

First of all, I would to prevent you : I am French, so my review will certainly (in fact that's even sure) includes some mistakes.
I also want you to that I don't write a review very often. I only do it for stories which "hooked" me. (and I never let a review in English in fact ')

Well, all of this to make you understand one thing : I am such a big fan of your fiction ! So, yes, it was hard to me sometimes to understand everything you wrote (especially during your amazing huge paragraphs), but I understood enough to follow the line of your story. And even if I didn't understand every word, you succeeded to make me feel so bad, so sad for Harry and Severus. You succeeded to make me cry, and not just once or twice !
I am also impress by your really smart exploitation of the J.K Rowling's text. You used so well Snape's memories and you link it so incredibly with Gray ! And, in fact, I think that these little details are the ones which make the difference. Because I read so much story who didn't use the real text. And then, when there is one which make it different, this is... wonderful !
I don't know if you follow me but, I think these details made me really fall in love with your story. More that it already was.

To speak about an other subject, I found so cute when you used some french words sometimes. Ahah. I was proud of my nationality ;)
Well, I would to ask you, someone had already translate your story in French or no ? Because, well it's just a thought right now, I don't have a lot of time and I'm not enough good in English for the moment to do it, but I would translate your fiction in French. If you agree of course ! And if I have the possibility to do it... But normally I will study the English langage more deeply next year, so I will be able to better understand your story to translate it. So, here is my question : could you let me translate your fiction if I have the time to do it next year ?

Anyway, I think I told you everything I would. I will read you future fiction with a lot of pleasure and I really want to tell you : "Bravo ! Ton histoire était extraordinaire. Continue d'écrire. Et surtout continue d'y croire. L'amour est une force, comme tu l'as si bien fait comprendre."
A little word in French to conclude ;) I let you discover what it means
Bye and really, really, thank you for your story ! It was an amazing dream !
Dela

OMG! This story was simply beautiful. So well written! I cried!

You bring me to tears with the emotional rollercoaster that this masterpiece has taken me on. You've brought these characters to life in a way that is awe inspiring. I absolutely LOVE the pure INGENUITY of this plot!
NOTE TO ALL WHO READ THIS REVIEW, THIS IS A MUST READ!

I just wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing such a beautiful, touching story! I think this is one of the best and most well-written Time-travel/Snarry fics I've read so far! I'll definitely be reading this over and over again for a long time

LuLu

I usually don't like time travel fics but thus now was amazing and is something to be truly proud of well done!

Wow. Just, wow. Good job! You've gone above and beyond any expectations I had for this story. Looking forward to read the rest of your stories!

I normally reserve my opinions (and thus, reviews) until the end of the story, but this story is off to such a good start that I must commend you. I sincerely hope that the story remains this way till the very end. Anyways, good job so far. You raised just enough mystery to keep me interested, but not too much so as to leave me feeling out of depth. I know this fic is completed, but do continue writing more fics!

omigawwd...i don't think there was a single moment when my eyes weren't leaking tears...TT_TT beautiful as always, though. i'm afraid to read the next chapter! i know it's just going to be so heart-wrenchingly sad and i'll be choking on my tears the entire time again...merlin, i hate how i can't stop reading, so i'm walking around with puffy eyes all day! 3

Hi, I've just finished to read your story and i've found it wow! (sorry i'm French and don't speak a very good english :) ) i've like to have these of my E-book, so i could read it one more time another time :) i thought you could send me the story per E-mail ? (i have to say, i will do NOT change anything or 'publicy' with my name, this is your story and it will stay so, i also swear that i will make NO money with it!) i would be very happy if you could consider it and i hope you'll send it to me to :
I hope to read from you,
Lily

Wow Harry's traveling back in time again. This should be good.