|Reviews for Hostage|
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/3/2013
| Doodlebug QT chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Okay so I finally finished your story. There are a few things that I liked and a few that I didn't.
Things that I liked:
Amon was very charismatic, giving him a mysterious and slight addicting kind of charm that I found very intriguing. I was very interested to learn more about his personality and his sureness that he had everything under control and was always one step ahead of his prisoner. I love it when villains are this sly and sexy. ,':)
Things that I didn't like:
The very immature way Korra seems to respond to every dilemma is annoying. I was not pleased by the way she was so obtrusively rude for no reason. I understand that she's in a very traumatic position with being taken prisoner by two bloodbending brothers, but she doesn't have to be visibly snide and uncooperative towards Tarrlok or the townsfolk. I mean if she's going to get Tarrlok to help her, she doesn't need to break his heart to do it, just try being a little more sympathetic and understanding.
I mean she's the Goddamn Avatar: start acting like it woman!
| TheWallsWeBreakThrough chapter 9 . 9/27/2013
Have to admit, slightly deflated by the ending. It was a little sudden. But your characterisation was perfect and I managed to love and hate Tarrlok and Noaktak simultaneously. And your Korra is just brilliant - so snide!
You've also got a great writing style. Not overly descriptive, but descriptive enough... If that makes any sense!
All in all, I really really enjoyed this. I had to read it all in one go! A sequel would be most appreciated ;)
| lostjoie9 chapter 2 . 8/26/2013
I couldn't even think about what korra was thinking about when amon bloodbended her. Too damned scary for thought!
| Lachrymal Eve chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I can't believe I'm writing this review now - I just had so much fun reading your fic and despite the slightly dodgy ending I loved it more than any other Amorralok fic that I've read...or any other LoK fic, even. I was kind of looking forward to another event but like you said in the last chapter I'm still glad you ended it instead of just leaving it unfinished. AND PLEASE UPLOAD THE DRABBLES. I've read The Greatest Trophy of the Revolution as well and I just can't get enough of your fic ;_; Also the sequel, too! Please YOUR FIC IS LIKE OXYGEN IN MY LIFE NOW I'LL GLADLY THROW AWAY MY DIGNITY JUST PLEASE ;_;
| the dark euphie chapter 9 . 7/11/2013
I was actually hoping for something a little different, but I do like this. Noa got his ass kicked finally. I'd love to see a sequel to this. Tarrlok and Korra seem to have grown up finally.
| aeva elementia chapter 8 . 5/23/2013
They probably won't make it- but an effort is important :D
Patiently, I await the next chapter.
| aeva elementia chapter 7 . 5/23/2013
Okay, Noatak's voyeurism is disturbing. I do like that you've written him in this intelligent madman vein.
| aeva elementia chapter 6 . 5/23/2013
Yup, definitely a 'Strings' fan. :D
And now, their UST's about to turn into smut!
| aeva elementia chapter 5 . 5/23/2013
Now she's feeling it too... I wonder how long it'll take them to get to it.
| aeva elementia chapter 4 . 5/23/2013
The unfortunate usually listen to any hope-giving tale...
And now the UST is between all three...
| aeva elementia chapter 3 . 5/23/2013
UST already building up between the lil brother and the girl :D
Oh, this is going to be rich; bandits, against these three?
| aeva elementia chapter 2 . 5/23/2013
Hmm. Didn't think it would turn out quite like this- I'm liking it more!
| aeva elementia chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Mm! I've been lookin for some new Korrlok- please keep up the good work.
| pinkyapple chapter 8 . 5/8/2013
Oh god,this is fabulous. Really freaking fabulous. Amon/Noatok's characterization, Tarrlok's desperation and fragility, and Korra just being Korra: amazing. I cannot wait to see what happens next!