|Reviews for every scene you ever thought of|
| my calico chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Hahaha that was actually pretty funny. Great job! :D
| LuvBadeForever chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
hahahaha I love it!
| heyitsmelucyxxx chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
hahaha oh my god, one of my favorite stories ever! so hilarous and I love how it was totally bade centered (my otp) but had a bit of jori ( because I think they are adorable) love it! you should make a multi chapter like this story(:
| khay chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
i love the way you write.
and this, right here, is why i love beckandjade :)
great fic. thanks for sharing.
| even lovers drown chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Oh my gosh, I might sound like a creepy stalker here, but I read this - I think - on livejournal and I am elated that it's been posted on FFN because now I can add it to my favourites list.
I love that this story is tightly packed with humour and subtle characterization. Even Tori felt like Tori. Your writing flows very nicely and the dialogue all feels natural, which makes this a wonderful read, and the whole idea of Jade wanting to experiment but Beck stands his ground is ingenious. This Beck particularly shines, deflecting Jade's arguments lightly without judging her or being patronizing. I find him so bland on the show. He had awesome lines: "I like pants" and "Real Life Beck is fine with that and hopes you two will be very happy together."
Also you've captured the lived-in quality of this pairing that made me like them on Victorious with small things like "She hooks her leg around his" and "it's such a Beck compliment that she lets him slide their fingers together again when the bell rings for them to go to lunch". The writing was so concise that I literally liked every single line, but this fits them so well! "Beck's hot and kind of ridiculous ninja calm, and Jade's hot and probably crazy. She acknowledges this about herself, just like all the therapists did back in the day before everyone decided that antisocial and vaguely homicidal was just Jade's thing."
I'll stop now because I've rambled too much but I still feel that my review is inadequate for such an incredible oneshot.