|Reviews for Warriors Orochi Return to Chaos|
| Radathir chapter 3 . 11/28/2012
Reviewing this chapter 3, I thought to try some Ancient Alien stuff, if you don't like it please say!
| Firewing0 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Looks interesting, I can't wait to see what Da Ji's up to.
I like your use of description, it's better than I can do. Though I would say that your sentence structure could use improving, instead of using so many commas maybe you could split up some of the sentences. Just my opinion anyway
| Radathir chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Thanks for your troll reviews sid...
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
I like trains