Reviews for Heartbeat
Name Not Given chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Very nice! Not sure about the ending paragraph - the story could stand alone as a moment between characters, but then again, the last line is a nice touch - but still, very nice.

Good characterization, for both characters. "Mega in love" and "May's temper/loneliness" were very well portrayed, I think. And I liked the little touches of detail you included. How they physically interact, lines like "Mega tangled his fingers in her wet hair and pulled her into his first kiss in a long time", which gives the character context beyond the story, just lovely.

And on a selfish note - I've shipped these two for years, so I am super happy to see a story about them! And it's actually really good? Made my weekend! Thank you so much for writing and sharing!