|Reviews for Cardinal King|
| Havoc's-Tears chapter 14 . 5/27/2013
Yay! Your back its been a while. I'm really glad to see an update and that your still working on this. )
Very dramatic chapter, where do I start? Ah Venus poor Venus that was kind of brutal and intense. I feel sorry for her. I also liked the comparison with Kunzite in the manga.
Wow Beryl is flying around with no soul. Lol yea, I admit I laughed when I read that, it fits! XD Yea even though she isn't evil here, I still hate her lol!
I also think you should try to think of first names for the guys eventually. It may be a little difficult but it can be fun too. I dunno I just think its a bit odd that they are still addressing eachother by their last names. I just don't see them being so formal with one another but that's just my opinion.
Geez Kobai really preached to Mamoru didn't he? I enjoyed their little conversation and how he remembers more than the rest of them. Mamoru should be getting tired though of feeling like everything is his fault . Ah poor guy.
Well anyway, I'm excited for whenever we finally get to the backstory in Elysion and have some of those questions answered. I am really digging what your doing with this. Keep it up! D
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 14 . 5/26/2013
It's been two months and a week since you updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, please update the next chapters soon and not in months. Keep it coming.
| Puffgirl1952 chapter 14 . 5/26/2013
I am Following...keep it coming...
| Artemis the Moon Maiden chapter 14 . 5/26/2013
Oh cool yeah that makes sense. Hey you seen sera myus? They have first and last names and I thought hmm why doesnt she use those? This kinda reminds me of PGSM with all the drama if you added a counterpart for Hina i'd die and go to heaven. Cant wait for more! Hey have you heard of terran moon? On tumblr this lady sailor scribbles is making a series and it's simalar to this you should check it out!
| Minirowan chapter 14 . 5/25/2013
As time consuming it is to find names, I think these guys are at a point where they can forgo the formalities of last names.
I'm guessing what happened to Venus is this story's version of Kunzite's brainwashing session after Mamoru was taken in the manga. However, what I find really interesting is the extent of Kobai's memories. He remember a lot more than the others did! I suppose it may be due to him being active longer than the others.
Anyway, I can't wait to see what you've got planned for Usagi! I wonder if you're going to have her brainwashed or something else.
Great job as always! But I'm sorry to hear Helios is giving you so much trouble.
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/2/2013
Please update soon
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/12/2013
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| Guest chapter 13 . 4/7/2013
Update soon please
| xSmallLadySerenity13 chapter 4 . 4/5/2013
Pretty Good Story! A Different But Interesting Take On Things Please Continue!
| Malevolent Dark Reflection chapter 13 . 3/26/2013
It was a nice twist to have the Dark Kingdom headquarters be in Elysion. Talk about adding insult to injury. I really wonder what the significance of that is, as well as what caused the Moon Kingdom to invade.
I felt so bad for Shingo. It seemed like he was lost and confused. Also, I loved how Moegi, Hanada and Midori were able to help Mamoru keep his head up somewhat. It seemed like he was going into a dark place there for a moment. If not for his friends, Mamoru would have done something really reckless like go into Dark Kingdom territory alone with no plan or anything. Update soon!
| Venus5-Gryffindor chapter 13 . 3/23/2013
Great Chapter! though i reckon that Venus shouldn't die until the final battle
| GiggleHeMan chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
This is very interesting, and your writing is spot on. Please continue with this lovely story 8)
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/23/2013
Update soon love this story
| Artemis the Moon Maiden chapter 13 . 3/22/2013
"Beryl make yourself useful and start carving!" XD love it! And I have to say Bishounen shintenou cardinal king sounds cool even though this is called Cardinal King, both names are nice. Though Im not sure pretty boy is what suits them...XD well Zoisite is pretty like a lady...I've always pictured Jadeite to act feminine when he's mad, Nephrite has lady hair and Kunzite and Mamoru are gorgeous! Well at least in the manga the anime is a different story...
I know how this will end with the reunion and stuff but you add twist to it I always want more! And at first when Shingo came (one of my favorite parts btw) I was like omf ChibiMamo! Too bad... so far so SUPERCALAFRAGALISTICEXPEALAD OUS! And very interesting too :) wonderful job! Im surprised no one has ever done this before! It's so original, but I'm sure once you finish it'll get sooo popular in a couple of months SM fanfic writers will be making TONS of these and it'll be cliche but of course, no one will compare to this it's just really good! Hey, does Hanada (love that name) Midori and everyone the other's names mean anything like how the senshi's names are puns?
| Sakura Scout chapter 13 . 3/22/2013
"If only he could magnify the amount of energy; it felt almost like it was bottled-necked, like he wasn't allowing as much to pass through as he wanted or as it could allow. He had to figure out how to get around the block if he wanted any chance of success. He needed to find a way."
Does this mean that Tuxedo Mask's cane or King Endymion's staff anytime soon? That would so cool if it were to happen, but I know that whatever you come up with will be just as great if not better. Every surprise you've thrown our way has been a delight, so I know that I won't be disappointed.
I eagerly await the next installment. :D