Reviews for The War Prize
Queen Witch chapter 6 . 3/28
I anxiously await the next chapter~ You're doing a marvelous job.
Jade chapter 6 . 3/16
Ahhhh! I'm so happy you're writing again! It would be interesting to see a story where Zuko and Katara are the 'favored' ones and the different dynamics for Azula to be the odd man out despite her possible prodigy status
Bloody Hearts chapter 6 . 3/8
Oh please update soon! This has really taken my heart!
lordazula chapter 6 . 2/26
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The Amazing Mumbo chapter 6 . 2/25
This is amazing! Thank you so much for picking the story back up!
JLdark chapter 6 . 2/20
Great job Zuko! I almost thought Katara would fail, he did get job sneaking and supporting her, maybe Azulon will not be so hard on him, if he decides to punish him, if not Ozia could do something to him or ignore and say that what he did is not how a royal behave. I think Hama will be a big deal in the future, she could even try to do something to Azulon, or maybe Katara will be ready if she tries anything. As for Kaya she almost remembered Shu! Or maybe she already regained some of her memories, I'm not sure how Lu Ten will deal with Hakoda or even if Katara and Kaya and talking about her her POV was interesting but what she did for her family is amazing but will she be happy in the future? Thanks for this amazing story and you for creating I look forward to the next chapter and until next chaptern
JLdark chapter 5 . 2/20
Wow this chapter was intense! Azula trying to get Katara, it was a surprise how this develops especially the relationship that Katara has with Azulon, very emotional too that promise he made, I don't know how it will end but so far I like their interactions, with Zuko too! Even if was short I liked that he made her talk, not in the best way but they bonded, besides he was the one who stopped Azula! That was amazing, I think Zuko can get stronger when he is protecting someon; maybe he could get stronger if he trains with Katara in the future. And Hama! She will train her, that could get dangerous and it will helps Katara's training a lot how strong she will get with training? Maybe stronger than Azula, in the future she will need to be cautious if she wants to try to something like she did at the beginning of the chapter.
JLdark chapter 4 . 2/20
Ooh this explains why Lu Ten did that for Kaya! And it clears that strange feeling I had about him, so Oma and Shu! They had to be fire and water this time, not and easy way for them but maybe this time it could be better. I think you made a great introduction with Azulon, but I'm surprised that Katara managed to make a connection with him, it seem her curiosity and innocence did made an impression on him, and he already think of her as kin, but for now it seem that she will be alone with her other family, I wonder how that will turn out.
JLdark chapter 3 . 2/20
I have some mixed feelings about Lu Ten, I mean I really like him and the way you write him is really good too, yet I don't understand why he saved Kaya and Katara? As Katara put it he is their savior yet their stealer, is confusing for me how to feel about him, yet I look forward how he manages to protect them and five them a better life in the fire nation, if he can. As for Iroh he has already set what he wants to do with Katara, I'm surprised that he already knows how to redirect lightning.
JLdark chapter 2 . 2/19
So it was Katara in a way gave Iroh wisdom to face his father and try to keep his family together, all of his family. I'm looking forward how it will develop and that Kaya will have to adapt
JLdark chapter 1 . 2/19
Well I think this is interesting and the way Iroh reacted I can understand, he may be old and wise but what changed him was the death of his son, I can see why he is different yet his nature is not, very interesting indeed, I look forward to this story and how it develops, specially Lu Ten, this is the first fic I read that focus on him.
Willowdove chapter 6 . 2/17
This is BEAUTIFUL storytelling. I enjoy the reincarnation aspect wth Lu Ten and Kaya its unexpected and a nice touch. I love the way you're able to portray familial, unromantic love it's so pure and honest and raw, and really hard to pull off right. I hope you continue with this I'd love to see where it goes
Paloma Abril Malfoy-Granger chapter 5 . 2/3
So I dont know what to say! Really I dont have words for this!
Hoping for the next chapter!
Paloma Abril Malfoy-Granger chapter 4 . 2/3
O my god! This story is going better! Jjj
Katara y Azulon!
And now Katara is going to be along!
Paloma Abril Malfoy-Granger chapter 2 . 2/3
Ok I dont have words for the thoughs of Iroh! Really!
I want to read more!
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