|Reviews for Keith and Natani's Adventure|
| Nixxon Mysterio chapter 2 . 1/17
...Does it really take 3 years for you to finish this? What the actual hell?
| Tdanko chapter 2 . 1/8
Not done with the chapter you say. Three years later i say.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
Next part please
| bazooka goblin chapter 2 . 8/7/2013
little liar u said fuck twice. :3 love the story!
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/12/2013
when is this gonna be finished?!
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/23/2013
love the story so far but your killing me with the wait!
| Erik chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Cool first chapter :3 love Natani's reaction at the end :p
| Wolfsalvo chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
lol, i read this fast, but it was a short humourous tale, and even though it is not a full feldged story, it is a decent and acceptable chapter... i have read shorter.
good day/night to you... and no, the world did not end, more rather, the planets all aligned each other.
| Wolfsalvo chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
'What the actual fuck.', sat
Second warning: I say fuck once in this.
HAHA! u said it TWICE, you little LIER! xD
anyways, good chapter... i was waiting to see the 'second' fuck just so i could do that! xD good job on turning the comic, into a chapter.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
This was awesome! MOAR!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
NEED MORE FAN FIC!