Reviews for Losing It
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
I don't think Joel would hit Ellie and tell her that the condition that he brings her to the Fireflies doesn't matter. You snatched me out of the story with that. I also don't think he would clench his gun just to make his allies listen to him if that's what he was doing around the beginning of this short story. I do, however, like that you dubbed Bill as Fat Bastard. That's too funny.
ableon chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
I think you've captured the essence of the characters quite well. I would love to see more, I simply can't wait for the game to be released! :D Great job on this, as well as your other works on this game!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
I'm not logged in right now and I know this is a One-Shot but pleease do another chapter! I loved this too much! ):

- Love, UniqueBeings